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Openings
When he opened his fist
what had been momentarily
perceived as a threat
was seen as a gift
when she opened the box
a smile of perfection replaced
his fear of rejection
when he opened his heart
she put on the ring
when she opened her hand he sparkled with joy.
what had been momentarily
perceived as a threat
was seen as a gift
when she opened the box
a smile of perfection replaced
his fear of rejection
when he opened his heart
she put on the ring
when she opened her hand he sparkled with joy.
Published 28th Feb 2017
| Edited 6th Mar 2024
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Anonymous
1st Mar 2017 00:25am
Aww, this one made me smile.
2nd Mar 2017 00:08am
5th Mar 2017 11:05pm
Lovely metaphoric, Josh. Only until we're open can we know the joys of receiving.
