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19th Aug 2011 00:24am
...but not scary enough....and a missed oppurtunity to shape the words to look like a rope :-)
when you find me (more threatening than 'if')
dead.
remember
you
were
the
rope
(see the hanging rope of words?)
Nice idea :-)
when you find me (more threatening than 'if')
dead.
remember
you
were
the
rope
(see the hanging rope of words?)
Nice idea :-)
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2011 2:37pm
21st Oct 2011 2:35pm
The concept is brilliant...
But its just too understated to be really chilling...
Working on the way H did it, could be fun.
My try...
During
my
last
breath
you
rest
assured,
you
were
the
noose.
You should work this piece, over and over, it'll be a heck of a lot of fun, and also the end result will be outstanding.
But its just too understated to be really chilling...
Working on the way H did it, could be fun.
My try...
During
my
last
breath
you
rest
assured,
you
were
the
noose.
You should work this piece, over and over, it'll be a heck of a lot of fun, and also the end result will be outstanding.
26th Oct 2011 00:31am
yes. when i wrote this piece, i admit i didnt put much thought into it but i do plan to elaborate it to make it truly haunting! :D thanx for the ideas
Anonymous
26th Oct 2011 11:22am
Please let me know when you do...
I would love to see the end result.
I would love to see the end result.
