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Black sun
As I get close
They run so far
Is love supposed
To leave a scar
Will I die
A broken gem
If I try
to care for them
What is love
Can this kill me
One star
Will set me free
One Star
Will set me free
Scorching me
black sun burns
Blistering me
No return
Blistering me
No return
Black sun
Shine on me
Black sun
Shine on me
Will you burn
Away my pain
Will you burn
Away my rain
Will you burn
Right Through my vains
Will you burn
My life's Bain
Will you burn
Till I am slain
Will you burn
Burn again
Published 27th Feb 2017
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11th Mar 2017 8:52pm
The repetition adds such depth to your emotional vulnerability. I enjoy seeing this sensitive side to you, Leo. It's wonderful. (:
25th Mar 2017 00:41am
Some verse I like to make concise like your verse. Its so easy to waffle on. Its difficult to project the idea in so few words. Appreciation from COMPOedWITHrazORZ
25th Mar 2017 00:45am
