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Another Roll Of Two Ply
Messages scribbled on the bathroom stall
I can't even comprehend it all
The number is fake
And I never met Jake
But that interpretational art has got my attention
I think there's something I forgot to mention
I scribbled my poems in erasable ink
And some one has changed them
To Swahili I think
I believe his words right
So my pen says goodnight
Farewell to all for
Its always the same in
The End
Locked out or locked in
nobody really reads this crap
I can't even comprehend it all
The number is fake
And I never met Jake
But that interpretational art has got my attention
I think there's something I forgot to mention
I scribbled my poems in erasable ink
And some one has changed them
To Swahili I think
I believe his words right
So my pen says goodnight
Farewell to all for
Its always the same in
The End
Locked out or locked in
nobody really reads this crap
Published 26th Feb 2017
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Anonymous
26th Feb 2017 00:33am
You got some play of words in here Tim with good flow as for chronicles of bathroom incidentals i'm pretty sure we all have a tale..or is it tail lol
26th Feb 2017 00:49am
26th Feb 2017 00:38am
This felt like an automatic Write-was it?
When words roll like they do here its very much like "riffing" can sometimes stimulate.
If You stare long enough other languages make perfect sense -Invisible ink or no
When words roll like they do here its very much like "riffing" can sometimes stimulate.
If You stare long enough other languages make perfect sense -Invisible ink or no
26th Feb 2017 00:50am
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26th Feb 2017 7:11am
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28th Feb 2017 7:39pm
27th Feb 2017 4:03am
"And some one has changed them
To Swahili I think" > these lines brought a smile to my face :-)
I can see you had fun writing this one!
To Swahili I think" > these lines brought a smile to my face :-)
I can see you had fun writing this one!
28th Feb 2017 7:40pm
27th Feb 2017 8:21am
An enjoyable poem.
From that part of us that keeps us
in a less than serious place, lets us
enjoy the simple things...
From that part of us that keeps us
in a less than serious place, lets us
enjoy the simple things...
28th Feb 2017 7:41pm
