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Indelible Blue
An indelible blue looking out to you
seducing the pain to wash away
with stolen keyboard strokes
a few extra x's and o's where
decimals move with inapprehension
carrying fantasy dreams offshore
where sandcastles are built with
riches never to be crowned
holding secret keys to happiness
breathless my tomorrows begin
under guise of the salty moon
worries behind,necks entwined
newly discovered swans swoon
seducing the pain to wash away
with stolen keyboard strokes
a few extra x's and o's where
decimals move with inapprehension
carrying fantasy dreams offshore
where sandcastles are built with
riches never to be crowned
holding secret keys to happiness
breathless my tomorrows begin
under guise of the salty moon
worries behind,necks entwined
newly discovered swans swoon
Published 21st Feb 2017
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22nd Feb 2017 2:36pm
Long distance love replaces touch with keyboards, but the desire is just as deep and dreams do manifest. I see an ocean and two swans typically make a heart when their necks are entwined.
Soft write, Tim.
Soft write, Tim.
24th Feb 2017 9:53pm
23rd Feb 2017 5:53am
Enjoyed these lines most of all:
'with stolen keyboard strokes
a few extra x's and o's where
decimals move with inapprehension'
It flows quietly out to sea...
'with stolen keyboard strokes
a few extra x's and o's where
decimals move with inapprehension'
It flows quietly out to sea...
24th Feb 2017 9:54pm
24th Feb 2017 1:17am
This is very serene and very haunting. I keep seeing a soft glowing moon reflecting on the waves of a midnight blue ocean. Very nice.
24th Feb 2017 9:54pm
