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Oceansize
Oceansize
"I watched the ocean break on the shore, come together with no harm done"~Perry
Immensity licked
one drop at a time
sails raise
glide
calm waters
coast to skyline
hands
fin shape waves
reach in, curl back
swath and swaddled
embrace
sluice, salts
kiss
they deem him obvious, shadow and sun
dot to shimmering glass, saline clear
breath pours as observed sand creatures stand on shore
no wide lines
gaps simply graft
zephyr wind
breath on my back
this oceanworld moves me
holding hull
deft in direction across Bhebak
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Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
20th Feb 2017 6:18am
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Re: Re. Oceansize
22nd Feb 2017 3:43pm
Dear Queen thank You for Your kind words!!! It is Odysseus -what a journey!!!
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Re: Re. Oceansize
24th Feb 2017 3:57pm
Indeed, A love for all the Goddesses and Gods-They've all been inspiration since childhood-Who could forget Neptune ;)
Re. Oceansize
20th Feb 2017 11:46am
having the elements n soul, Soul Poet. Immense n infinite is the tranquility felt in ur words. Shine on u. xx
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Re: Re. Oceansize
22nd Feb 2017 3:45pm
Uma You've been gone far too long!!! It's good to see You!!! Thank You for the visit and kindness!!! Immense and infinite-Indeed!!!
Re. Oceansize
20th Feb 2017 2:21pm
Re: Re. Oceansize
22nd Feb 2017 3:48pm
I appreciate You catching the journey John-Always good to see you here!!!
Re. Oceansize
20th Feb 2017 3:32pm
There is a transcendental tranquility in this one, my Friend. Your incredible imagery invites the imagination to experience the infinite, vast beauty that is "oceansize".....
Upon these calm waters, you are in command of your creative craft....the captain of my spirit....sail on.....
Upon these calm waters, you are in command of your creative craft....the captain of my spirit....sail on.....
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Re: Re. Oceansize
22nd Feb 2017 3:52pm
Ahhhh DE so Appreciate You!!! The Journey is carried by The Beauty-What Love-Tranquil are the waters!!!
Re. Oceansize
24th Feb 2017 7:36pm
Soula!! you just dived your way through me!! Mawah! babe
love to come back to energy like this ;D
love to come back to energy like this ;D
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Re: Re. Oceansize
24th Feb 2017 7:41pm
Ahhhh Florian You Are Too good to me!!! Thank You for catching the waves!!!
Humbled by the RL!!!
Humbled by the RL!!!
Re. Oceansize
Anonymous
25th Feb 2017 11:26pm
لهواكَ هذا الليلُ أسهرُه
نشوى، أبيحُ الليلَ أسراري
ها أنتَ، ها أنا
قصّةٌ بدأَتْ
هواكَ آفاقي مرصعّةٌ
هواكَ كل مواسمي امتلأتْ
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Re: Re. Oceansize
25th Feb 2017 11:31pm
Well I can tell You it looks as Beautiful as You do HoneyPot!!! I just KNOW there's orgasm in there-If I hear it said the waves will knock me just right...Long ways of guidance to help me learn to read it Write and speak-But ...elegance and Beauty is ALWAYS known -Whichever language You choose!!!