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Good to be alive
Whether rain or shine
It is good to be alive
Through pain and time
You will survive
Drowning out the weak
An example in the street
Whether rain or shine
Its good to be alive
It is good to be alive
Through pain and time
You will survive
Drowning out the weak
An example in the street
Whether rain or shine
Its good to be alive
Published 19th Feb 2017
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19th Feb 2017 10:55am
19th Feb 2017 10:55am
19th Feb 2017 12:30pm
Most of my poems are longer. Iunno , felt like making a short one .. hmm . Well if i ever revise the poem and add to it ill let ya know . Sometimes i do that :D
Thank you for the compliment regardless
Cheers
Thank you for the compliment regardless
Cheers
20th Feb 2017 1:27am
The theme resonates loud and clear despite the poem's curt nature. Good job.
20th Feb 2017 2:21am
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- Edited 20th Feb 2017 4:22am
20th Feb 2017 4:19am
Welcome to DU Leo.....powerful ink for very few words.......good to breathe life isn't it......purple luv & hugs xo :)
