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in the nick of time
i hate living in this home
better yet, house, for i do not own
growing pain and anger from thy
rather get shot, popped, or more then ever, die
hate this place , hate grows everyday
hate is a powerful word but i mean what i say
needed to write this by the end of the night
thats it, all i had to say, just on my mind
critiques are welcome but it was to spare time
better yet, house, for i do not own
growing pain and anger from thy
rather get shot, popped, or more then ever, die
hate this place , hate grows everyday
hate is a powerful word but i mean what i say
needed to write this by the end of the night
thats it, all i had to say, just on my mind
critiques are welcome but it was to spare time
Published 17th Aug 2011
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Anonymous
17th Aug 2011 3:17am
I wouldn't say this is poetic gold, or even a poem at all. I would say this is more a journal entry at best...My only real complaint is the lower case i's. There is no real reason for it...so I'd capitalize them, it just looks neater and like you care.
