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rOMancE
Romance...with you. A shitty slow dance, stood no chance, tossed aside like old pants...Your touch, melts me. The rush, tells me. I need help see, livin in hell we...Burned together, a lesson learned forever...Right after the bad weather...A rainbow, now will the pain go? You can make it. Take it. Break it in two....Kiss and wake up, from a nightmare, you'll be right there...To love the pain away on the day to day in your favorite way...Romance? No chance and no can'ts. A Dance? With me for eternity, til there's nothing left to burn in me...
Written for a competition on here 🙃
Written for a competition on here 🙃
Published 8th Feb 2017
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8th Feb 2017 9:25am
8th Feb 2017 2:38pm
Thank you very much! Any feedback is great but positive feedback is always very much appreciated
9th Feb 2017 1:50am
29th Dec 2018 4:34pm
I read this like a rap.
Is that Your intention?
Agree with LadyKilla, this would sound great as spoken aloud
Is that Your intention?
Agree with LadyKilla, this would sound great as spoken aloud
