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Cutie’s so Cruel
he gazes at her hips
watching them go from side to side
swears he's looking at a pendulum
hypnotized by the sway
like fine wine mixed with antifreeze
taste so good
but doesn't realize
the concoction’s killing him
cutie’s so cruel
she gives good girls a bad reputation
pretty on the outside
ugly on the in
so fit it should be ah sin
deep blue eyes with blond hair
hourglass shape tells
of a girl so seductive
but only for a limited time
she'll rock his world
haunt his dreams
chew him up then spit him out
afterwards act like it never happened
cutie’s so cruel
she gives bad girls a good reputation
sweet on the outside
sour on the in
so sexy it should be ah sin
he'll be watching like a stalker
wondering what he did wrong
no one will believe him
how can a girl so lovely
eat men's hearts
lonely boy fighting back with logic
dumb fool
he never stood a chance
watching them go from side to side
swears he's looking at a pendulum
hypnotized by the sway
like fine wine mixed with antifreeze
taste so good
but doesn't realize
the concoction’s killing him
cutie’s so cruel
she gives good girls a bad reputation
pretty on the outside
ugly on the in
so fit it should be ah sin
deep blue eyes with blond hair
hourglass shape tells
of a girl so seductive
but only for a limited time
she'll rock his world
haunt his dreams
chew him up then spit him out
afterwards act like it never happened
cutie’s so cruel
she gives bad girls a good reputation
sweet on the outside
sour on the in
so sexy it should be ah sin
he'll be watching like a stalker
wondering what he did wrong
no one will believe him
how can a girl so lovely
eat men's hearts
lonely boy fighting back with logic
dumb fool
he never stood a chance
Published 7th Feb 2017
| Edited 8th Feb 2017
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7th Feb 2017 2:47pm
7th Feb 2017 5:47pm
7th Feb 2017 8:21pm
I loved the juxtaposition between good girls and bad girls you used. Very clever :)
Willow
Willow
8th Feb 2017 7:07am
Have to watch out for those bad girls disguised as good girls... hehe 😁 Thanks for reading
Really like this DC sorry I'm only just catching up as I haven't been online for a couple weeks. I found this sing songy and charming and the vunerability that pours from the last stanza pierces my heart! Fab write!
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22nd Feb 2017 10:38am
There are a few poems that stand out to me. This one does for me, just because it feels fun yet dark. And chat away 😁 I love reading your comment. It makes me all warm inside... hehe
