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Sweet Girl
wavy hair
voluptuous lips
nice big breast with curvy hips
what more can a man want?
would be a shame to play me off
i’m the guy that can get inside your head
knowing that you want it sick
any hole filled like a dirty bitch
pushing you up against the wall
sucking on your neck to leave my mark
fondling those tits to keep you wanting
ripping clothes right off your body
are you still that sweet girl?
the one that I used to know?
is it secretly a lie?
do you stay up and fantasize?
you kneeling underneath the night sky
stars glimmering down
as I take my cock and shove it in your mouth
slamming face till I fill it up with jizz
feeling my balls against your chin
smeared makeup, tears falling with mascara
your fingers wrapped around my firm dick
licking up the tip
you smile with such a lovely grin
how about we meet up at the park?
lay you on the grass
moving those legs high up into the air
I fuck you without a care
slaps, bites, and two fingers
slipped inside places you never dreamed
hot tits, hot lips, hot stick in your slit
my perfect little sex doll
drag you up against a tree
have you hug it tight as I enter your backside
go in so hard that you feel every inch
quivering motions from your body aches
i'll turn you around and paint that pretty face
(drip, drip, all over your neck)
(drip, drip, down your breast)
(drip, drip, to your thighs)
(rub it in baby, rub it in)
on second thought…
you’re just as sweet as you ever been
voluptuous lips
nice big breast with curvy hips
what more can a man want?
would be a shame to play me off
i’m the guy that can get inside your head
knowing that you want it sick
any hole filled like a dirty bitch
pushing you up against the wall
sucking on your neck to leave my mark
fondling those tits to keep you wanting
ripping clothes right off your body
are you still that sweet girl?
the one that I used to know?
is it secretly a lie?
do you stay up and fantasize?
you kneeling underneath the night sky
stars glimmering down
as I take my cock and shove it in your mouth
slamming face till I fill it up with jizz
feeling my balls against your chin
smeared makeup, tears falling with mascara
your fingers wrapped around my firm dick
licking up the tip
you smile with such a lovely grin
how about we meet up at the park?
lay you on the grass
moving those legs high up into the air
I fuck you without a care
slaps, bites, and two fingers
slipped inside places you never dreamed
hot tits, hot lips, hot stick in your slit
my perfect little sex doll
drag you up against a tree
have you hug it tight as I enter your backside
go in so hard that you feel every inch
quivering motions from your body aches
i'll turn you around and paint that pretty face
(drip, drip, all over your neck)
(drip, drip, down your breast)
(drip, drip, to your thighs)
(rub it in baby, rub it in)
on second thought…
you’re just as sweet as you ever been
Published 6th Feb 2017
| Edited 8th Apr 2018
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10th Feb 2017 4:32am
Ah fuck... I don't think I can ever look at tree huggers the same way ;-)
"hot tits, hot lips, hot stick in your slit" > this line is so yummy (lol)
Awesome write, my friend
"hot tits, hot lips, hot stick in your slit" > this line is so yummy (lol)
Awesome write, my friend
10th Feb 2017 7:30am
lol, I remember when I wrote this. I was rather drunk and thought people would hate it. It turned out to be one of my most well received erotica at the time, lol. Not so much the second time around, but I still think it's hott 🤘 Thanks my tree hugging friend 😉
10th Feb 2017 7:45am
This is sexy!! Your name serves you well.
I couldn't resist taking it. :D
FS
I couldn't resist taking it. :D
FS
10th Feb 2017 10:06am
13th Feb 2017 12:01pm
13th Feb 2017 1:11pm
HaHa ^^ Well i do have more of what i like to call "hardcore erotic". Although i feel people don't seem to like those as much :-/ But i'll see what i can do ;-) Thanks for enjoying!
13th Feb 2017 2:00pm
Don't be afraid of people not liking it because not everyone's tastes are the same. Share what you want to share! 😊 X
24th Feb 2017 10:16am
Just a note here: if you write erotic, you're bound to get comments of the same caliber.
If that's not what you want, choose "no commrnts" when submitting or reconsider your topic --whatever we write and post, becomes fair game. Just sayin'
If that's not what you want, choose "no commrnts" when submitting or reconsider your topic --whatever we write and post, becomes fair game. Just sayin'
24th Feb 2017 11:19am
Fair game maybe. I just didn't want his comment seeing as it was just a boy trolling. In my eyes anyway. Thanks for removing.
2nd Mar 2017 4:13pm
No problem, and as you get to know certain members more, you'll see their style as is the case here, and it's more complimentary than trolling, with said member 😊
