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...and just like that!
... and just like that!
like a snap of a finger
he disappeared
into oblivion
never to be seen
'cept in memories
some melancholic
some
filled with
Hyena laughs
time
is an interesting entity
for it appears
to be sequential
whereas
to many
it is but a patchwork
of past and future
oblivion
is where
time
loses its meaning
and oblivion
is where
he found
peace!
© KDAmB 2017. All rights reserved.
Published 2nd Feb 2017
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2nd Feb 2017 4:09pm
^ True Story! Time is such an illusion, and yet the anchor around our human necks.
Good job, Birdman.
Good job, Birdman.
2nd Feb 2017 4:14pm
Welcome dear Sage One! Indeed yes! around our necks. Thank You so much dear respected friend, my immense gratitude for the visit and your appreciation! kind regards KDAmB
2nd Feb 2017 4:24pm
2nd Feb 2017 4:29pm
Welcome Sir TIm! Glad indeed I am to learn that a poet like you Sir, felt my scribble. Much obliged by your visit and appreciation dear friend! Thank You! KDAmB
Anonymous
2nd Feb 2017 4:43pm
Such a thought provoking piece.
I love your thoughts and perception of such things.
Thank you for sharing it with us, dear friend.
Truly delightful.
I love your thoughts and perception of such things.
Thank you for sharing it with us, dear friend.
Truly delightful.
2nd Feb 2017 5:07pm
Welcome Dear DeeplyRootedFriend!! lucky I am to have a generous friend like you. I thank you sincerely for your kind appreciation,support and encouragement. Means a lot. warm regards KDAmB
2nd Feb 2017 5:23pm
The ying and yang, the have and have not,
beautifully told within short lines throughout
this poem, giving despair its due in the end.
Artfully done.
beautifully told within short lines throughout
this poem, giving despair its due in the end.
Artfully done.
2nd Feb 2017 5:27pm
Welcome dear Friend Jerry! I am humbled, well and truly Sir, by your keen insight into my scribble and such kind appreciation. I thank You Jerry sincerely for your encouragement and steadfast support. Indeed means a lot! Thank You Once again ! KDAmB
2nd Feb 2017 7:18pm
2nd Mar 2017 12:09pm
Welcome and welcome to DU Eric. Thank you for your visit and appreciation. It is indeed an honor for me. regards KDAmB
Anonymous
3rd Feb 2017 00:43am
KD, you rocked it with the opening line, what a great way to hook the reader and the rest is an absolute gem of one the greatest unanswerable questions, time and space and 'footprints', nicely done my friend!
2nd Mar 2017 12:11pm
Welcome Dear friend Rina! apologies for the late expression of gratitude for such a great compliment. Your praised has well and truly humbled my soul. Thank You once again! Cheers! KDAmB
Anonymous
3rd Feb 2017 5:14am
'and oblivion
is where
he found
peace!'
If this was a passage from
a Bible ~ I'd say 'Amen` ...
As always, KD
your poetic words inspire.
~xo, Devlin
2nd Mar 2017 12:14pm
My Dear friend Dev! thank You so much.. for humbling me with your praise and awesome gesture of kindness and support for this one and for nominating my scribble last month. I am truly lost for words...my greatest of gratitude..Lady Dev!! Thank You! :-) KDAmB
3rd Feb 2017 9:56pm
2nd Mar 2017 12:15pm
ahh! Sir Whale! well what can I say other than my sincerest thanks for both your visit and such kind appreciation. I welcome both with a broadest of smiles. Thank You!
4th Feb 2017 7:04am
2nd Mar 2017 12:20pm
welcome dear Friend Duende! my apologies for the delayed Thanking of you for both your visit and such generous appreciation. I thank you sincerely for all your support and appreciation my friend. kind regards KDAmB
I leave this notelet now, for your future self to read then, when my now is in the past and has gone to be your now soon to be your past too - hope you had a great trip down memory lane, glad your back :) LadyRain.
26th Feb 2017 11:35pm
Thank You L!!! ☺ ☺ ☺ Thank You for your friendship both in my past, present and future!! Loved this beaut of a note from you my friend. Trip down memory lane was lovely for it had memories from near past with me when I went to the far past. Thanks for gracing my page Meghawati!! 🎉
