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Oh well ...
no one can see
what a broken heart looks like,
it beats and pulses just like any other
what a broken heart looks like,
it beats and pulses just like any other
Published 23rd Jan 2017
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Anonymous
23rd Jan 2017 1:27am
But it feels heavy.
6th Feb 2017 2:17am
Anonymous
23rd Jan 2017 6:42am
yes it does...it tries.
I can sense so much sadness in this poem Jeje, much i know too well :(
I can sense so much sadness in this poem Jeje, much i know too well :(
6th Feb 2017 2:19am
23rd Jan 2017 2:24pm
the heart bears up well
& attempts to become stronger in the broken places...
& attempts to become stronger in the broken places...
6th Feb 2017 2:19am
Thank You JohnFeddeler for the read and thoughtful comments...always appreciated
24th Jan 2017 1:51am
6th Feb 2017 2:21am
So true Ahavati .. if one takes the time to see ... Thank You for the read and thoughtful comments ... always appreciated
so true - one thing a broken heart usually does is make us look downwards :-(
I loved this poem :-)
I loved this poem :-)
6th Feb 2017 2:22am
Thank You so much David for the read and thoughtful comments ... much appreciated
