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Naked Passion
I await your next sentence
Before another can be written
Checking my inbox, pressing refresh
Clicking the link, watching for passion
My fingers type with restless hands bound behind me
As if in two places at once but neither where I want
To place them on you, to feel your nakedness
In the palm of my hand, on the tip of my tongue
The thoughts you invoke, the words you inspire
I am lost in your mind and found in your heart
My passion rises as you tease me to new heights
Pointing me in a direction of a beach called paradise
Guiding with your hand, driving through your forest
Leaping from the edge to swim inside your pool
My body tingles from the thought of loving you
It‟s all so real when you tell me of your touch
I can feel every circle and stroke you send to me
Somehow your fingers have entered my forbidden mind
You‟ve reached out to caress, to hold, to feel
While your lips kiss, and lick, you taste and swirl
My goddess, you have me on fire, ready to erupt
But holding back to make it last a little longer
And I am powerless to reach the climax
Until you decide to make my nectar cum
Will you taste me or place me inside your paradise?
Will you give me one more stroke or mount your lover‟s ride?
Before another can be written
Checking my inbox, pressing refresh
Clicking the link, watching for passion
My fingers type with restless hands bound behind me
As if in two places at once but neither where I want
To place them on you, to feel your nakedness
In the palm of my hand, on the tip of my tongue
The thoughts you invoke, the words you inspire
I am lost in your mind and found in your heart
My passion rises as you tease me to new heights
Pointing me in a direction of a beach called paradise
Guiding with your hand, driving through your forest
Leaping from the edge to swim inside your pool
My body tingles from the thought of loving you
It‟s all so real when you tell me of your touch
I can feel every circle and stroke you send to me
Somehow your fingers have entered my forbidden mind
You‟ve reached out to caress, to hold, to feel
While your lips kiss, and lick, you taste and swirl
My goddess, you have me on fire, ready to erupt
But holding back to make it last a little longer
And I am powerless to reach the climax
Until you decide to make my nectar cum
Will you taste me or place me inside your paradise?
Will you give me one more stroke or mount your lover‟s ride?
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Poem "Naked Passion"
This is a great poem! The strange and very weird thing is that just today I was thinking about writing a similar poem. It was just sort of swirling around in my head and "voila" here it is. This definitely has me inspired to come up with something very erotic pretty soon. ;)
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re: Poem "Naked Passion"
14th Aug 2011 8:19am
Thanks for commenting in such a great way! I think we all have erotic poems drifting around inside us, we just need the right muse to come along and poke us... jj
re: Poem "Naked Passion"
26th Oct 2014 8:23am
Scarlet, I was thinking about you and discovered that you were the first person to comment on one of my poems here on DUP. Keep in touch, call me any time or text me on my 587 1930 number. You know the rest... much love, jj
NAKED PASSION
Anonymous
14th Aug 2011 4:30pm
Very beautiful and well written.
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re: NAKED PASSION
14th Aug 2011 11:43pm
oh my..
Anonymous
15th Aug 2011 1:02am
that was so sexy!!
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re: oh my..
15th Aug 2011 1:47am
Thanks Meme. I feel funny thinking mememe. Always makes me think of George Harrison's song I Me Mine, lol. I won't ask your real name, but I'm just going to call you Meme as long as that's ok with you.
And I love hearing comments like that. I don't think of myself as sexy, but when I want to be, it's nice to have it noticed. I'm always writing for someone when I write a poem, and it's almost always 100% real, though sometimes artistic license is required to make it hit the spot. And some women just no how to bring out the caveman in me.
And I love hearing comments like that. I don't think of myself as sexy, but when I want to be, it's nice to have it noticed. I'm always writing for someone when I write a poem, and it's almost always 100% real, though sometimes artistic license is required to make it hit the spot. And some women just no how to bring out the caveman in me.
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16th Aug 2011 5:33pm
Amazingly Beatiful!
16th Aug 2011 1:43am
I love it.Thats a real life sensation....I will be posting my poem soon,I hope you will enjoy.
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16th Aug 2011 5:35pm
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6th Jan 2012 5:58pm
hey...this one was a complete knockout...i simply loved it...great job man...keep it up...
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6th Jan 2012 6:18pm
Naked Passion @ Passion & Pain
16th Nov 2011 10:25pm
*06/09/2006
Copyright © 2006 JJ Johnson
Library of Congress Control # 2011911189
ISBN: 0615503942 &
ISBN-13: 978-0615503943
Passion & Pain
available on Amazon.com @
http://astore.amazon.com/seedsandweeds-20
Copyright © 2006 JJ Johnson
Library of Congress Control # 2011911189
ISBN: 0615503942 &
ISBN-13: 978-0615503943
Passion & Pain
available on Amazon.com @
http://astore.amazon.com/seedsandweeds-20
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Thank you for commenting TommieLynn and welcome to DUP! Glad you enjoyed the ride, er-ah, read... hehehe! JJ
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Anonymous
17th Jul 2016 5:37am
This is absolutely delicious. There is nothing like the inspiration which flows within, and allows such sensual words to create a beautiful masterpiece.
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20th Jun 2017 2:09am
It all sounds very intense from what I have read here & of course, you have a strong & vivid imagination. It's the ultimate in safe sex, chatting online. The lady stimulated your creative desire, if nothing else. Trust me, I've been there. ;-)
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20th Jun 2017 4:53am
AH YES, IT SEEMS LIKE YESTERDAY BUT IT WAS SOOOOOO LONG AGO... THANKS FOR COMMENTING! JJ