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Crazy about you babe
When you make love to me; the world can end and I won't mind
When you are inside me; the fire is so high I can relate to fireworks on my body with high voltage energy
We breath without air, our hearts beating fast sometimes afraid to die due to the speed of it.
Making love to you is more than an orgasmic experience; it is a fusion of feelings and emotions that make me feel alive again.
When you are inside me; the fire is so high I can relate to fireworks on my body with high voltage energy
We breath without air, our hearts beating fast sometimes afraid to die due to the speed of it.
Making love to you is more than an orgasmic experience; it is a fusion of feelings and emotions that make me feel alive again.
Published 18th Jan 2017
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Anonymous
18th Jan 2017 1:00pm
Short but intense. A very nice write.
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19th Jan 2017 00:46am
The emotions of sex can elevate a person's mental state to unimaginable levels. Especially for women because they are connected in a way us men will never know or understand.
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19th Jan 2017 5:55pm
thanks lady poet for the encouragement... imagination can take us beyond the realms of time ...where we can mime rhyme and scheme things out... in totally sheer imagination..no mental nor sexual violation.. after all what is poetry for blasting off sexual ..lustful and finally ejaculation... culminating in orgasmic convulsions ..and then swooshh ...all is over who were you now all is buried emotion
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Anonymous
- Edited 12th Mar 2017 11:28am
12th Mar 2017 1:28am
Hey, nice try in trying to win the 'You're Always In My Heart' competition, lol. I entered that one too. I'm hoping I followed the rules correctly. lol. ;-)
12th Mar 2017 10:03pm
