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Free
Falling into oblivion
Screaming your name
Deaf you have become
To my pleaing calls
Bleeding in front of you
Your disgusted face
I'm dying
And calling thy name
I am
No more
You are
Free
Screaming your name
Deaf you have become
To my pleaing calls
Bleeding in front of you
Your disgusted face
I'm dying
And calling thy name
I am
No more
You are
Free
Published 13th Aug 2011
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13th Aug 2011 3:32pm
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11th Nov 2011 00:39am
Loved this one.
It was 'just'.
p.s-Sorry to be such a grammar Nazi. Plea is the noun form. It should probably be 'pleading' in the fourth line, to convey the desired meaning. Correct me if your intention was different.
Write on.
It was 'just'.
p.s-Sorry to be such a grammar Nazi. Plea is the noun form. It should probably be 'pleading' in the fourth line, to convey the desired meaning. Correct me if your intention was different.
Write on.
