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My Spring Equinox
In the spring equinox
Of my life
Everything was beautiful
And all was bright
My spirit was free
My mind filled with dreams
Of what I might become
And what I would be
If only I could flee
Life’s wretched winter
The causes my bones to ache
And my skin to shiver
And go back to the days
Of my spring equinox
When life was carefree
And I was on top
Of my life
Everything was beautiful
And all was bright
My spirit was free
My mind filled with dreams
Of what I might become
And what I would be
If only I could flee
Life’s wretched winter
The causes my bones to ache
And my skin to shiver
And go back to the days
Of my spring equinox
When life was carefree
And I was on top
Published 13th Jan 2017
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14th Jan 2017 4:26am
excellent and so well written, you really have a way with words - I could feel your passion here and you wishing away the days :-)
strong seasonal write - Like :-)
strong seasonal write - Like :-)
Anonymous
14th Jan 2017 6:16am
Snuggle...I enjoyed this because right about now...I'm freezing my ass off for starters...additionally, "if only" is the way I can summarize this..."if only"...the last stanza...excellent! Well done!!
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
16th Jan 2017 8:01am
Nicely penned, Kim, and fret not for she is just around the corner even for old lions such as ourselves. And you know what ? She's always there waiting for us. Always ! Be well.
