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Bein' 'Obese...'
...Emotionally so,
is bearin' the
backbreakin'
Weight
of the consequence
of feelin'
irrevocably
Inconsequential...
is bearin' the
backbreakin'
Weight
of the consequence
of feelin'
irrevocably
Inconsequential...
Published 13th Jan 2017
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13th Jan 2017 5:50pm
13th Jan 2017 6:48pm
13th Jan 2017 7:05pm
I've read this quite a few times, and its sparked something beautiful in my mind :) awesome stuff :)
13th Jan 2017 7:09pm
Thank you kindly, I hope that means you've been inspired to ink a piece of brilliance, becuz that'd be more than a compliment :)
13th Jan 2017 7:12pm
Interesting way to talk about your feelings by calling them fat lol,
Pretty creative though
Pretty creative though
13th Jan 2017 7:21pm
No, it's the "weight" of emotions...
not the size lol... thank you meanie lol jk... appreciate ur support truly
not the size lol... thank you meanie lol jk... appreciate ur support truly
13th Jan 2017 8:59pm
13th Jan 2017 10:20pm
13th Jan 2017 10:56pm
Dearest K... I'm so pleased you liked n added it go your list... so honored... thank u :)
14th Jan 2017 00:25am
14th Jan 2017 00:30am
Ooohhh so now I'm gonna have to
bum rush the 'pen' n suckle ur sweet kiss off his body! lol... Thank you so much Tara u sweet lil peace of heaven... :)
bum rush the 'pen' n suckle ur sweet kiss off his body! lol... Thank you so much Tara u sweet lil peace of heaven... :)
14th Jan 2017 00:46am
lol...
btw... how bout dem cowboys! ;) I'm gonna' hit your inbox up Sunday to 'celebrate'
btw... how bout dem cowboys! ;) I'm gonna' hit your inbox up Sunday to 'celebrate'
14th Jan 2017 00:54am
Anonymous
14th Jan 2017 3:09am
Yup, I've been there. It's no fun. Nice way to describe it.
14th Jan 2017 9:11am
Anonymous
14th Jan 2017 6:13am
PM!! Loved the way you did this...holds so much truth and to capture it the way you did...brilliant...pen respect!!
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
14th Jan 2017 9:42am
A a a a www we thank you sweetie, truly honored n grateful for your continued support :)
14th Jan 2017 4:10pm
I can understand this terrible weight of emotions being so heavy to carry around..
profound write Poe..
sending you my love..
Crim
profound write Poe..
sending you my love..
Crim
14th Jan 2017 8:34pm
Yea you n I both... Thank you my dear Crim., truly appreciate your support :)
Anonymous
14th Jan 2017 6:35pm
this is
quite simply
fucking clever as fuck
quite simply
fucking clever as fuck
Not surprised you truly GOT what I was doing... U lil genius you! :) grateful always sweetie n oh did u SEE that it had no RHYMING!!?? lol
14th Jan 2017 6:47pm
Love the way in so few lines you provide a wonderful write that can be interpreted as a metaphor.
14th Jan 2017 10:59pm
This read like an exhausted sigh to me. Felt all the way through the sink. Brilliant! :)
Willow
Willow
