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empty bed
Where I am it is cold
Not even sun’s embers
Have thought to warm the sky
I woke with you, alone
Hard thoughts would find no rest
My hands seek out relief
To wake and feel your weight
With every subtle breath
And heat beyond the sun
Not even sun’s embers
Have thought to warm the sky
I woke with you, alone
Hard thoughts would find no rest
My hands seek out relief
To wake and feel your weight
With every subtle breath
And heat beyond the sun
Published 13th Jan 2017
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Anonymous
13th Jan 2017 6:32pm
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15th Jan 2017 1:34pm
thank you - feeling very somber as i wrote this in the middle of a cold night somewhat lost and alone... so the poem truly conveys that mood...
really glad you liked it.
geoff
really glad you liked it.
geoff
13th Jan 2017 7:32pm
'Where I am it is cold
Not even sun’s embers
Have thought to warm the sky'
These lines have tripped me up and sent me head over heels, inspiring work, it truely is :)
Not even sun’s embers
Have thought to warm the sky'
These lines have tripped me up and sent me head over heels, inspiring work, it truely is :)
15th Jan 2017 1:37pm
thanks for the comment and the follow - yes, I really liked that opening, too!
I appreciate the encouragement...
geoff
I appreciate the encouragement...
geoff
14th Jan 2017 8:37am
15th Jan 2017 1:38pm
thank you my friend my head right now is needing to examine organizational constructs in free verse...
I really appreciate your encouraging words...
geoff
I really appreciate your encouraging words...
geoff
