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Passion's keep(er)
Your lips taste of sweetest spice,
the piquant flavor of lovers so divinely intoxicating.
We drink of an ancient vintage
and wear our perversions
like the embered dust of fallen stars.
It clings to our skin as sincerely
as the fruit of laden branches.
Beneath the tree of sorrow, we lay
among the ripened fruits and buried seeds.
I offer you my heart and body
as the aged bark splinters
my tendered flesh. The essence of a woman
is never forbidden, but a fine elixir,
which comes upon me
as the purple of bruises.
You compose me, as mistress, in your poems:
the heartaches I've confessed
the passion that burns behind a cesarean scar
ignites, and usurps us in your bed.
As I linger in the glow of sex & verse
you proclaim in your vulgar tone -
'When I write about you, Tereska,
it's just exactly the same as fucking you.'
And somehow, there is conspiracy in your words.
the piquant flavor of lovers so divinely intoxicating.
We drink of an ancient vintage
and wear our perversions
like the embered dust of fallen stars.
It clings to our skin as sincerely
as the fruit of laden branches.
Beneath the tree of sorrow, we lay
among the ripened fruits and buried seeds.
I offer you my heart and body
as the aged bark splinters
my tendered flesh. The essence of a woman
is never forbidden, but a fine elixir,
which comes upon me
as the purple of bruises.
You compose me, as mistress, in your poems:
the heartaches I've confessed
the passion that burns behind a cesarean scar
ignites, and usurps us in your bed.
As I linger in the glow of sex & verse
you proclaim in your vulgar tone -
'When I write about you, Tereska,
it's just exactly the same as fucking you.'
And somehow, there is conspiracy in your words.
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Re. Passion's keep(er)
8th Jan 2017 9:43am
your poem abides in the shade of sorrow, Kas,
like the woman only slightly purpled
by the hard words of sex & poetry...
like the woman only slightly purpled
by the hard words of sex & poetry...
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Re: Re. Passion's keep(er)
8th Jan 2017 10:05am
Thank you, John,
your beautiful comments and kindness leave me smiling.
There is much beauty to be had in the shade, yes?
your beautiful comments and kindness leave me smiling.
There is much beauty to be had in the shade, yes?
Re. Passion's keep(er)
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Jan 2017 10:19am
8th Jan 2017 10:15am
And yet somehow you still feel bare, emotionally empty beneath this tree. Behind the passion your sadness reads of lost potential. Nicely written.
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Re: Re. Passion's keep(er)
8th Jan 2017 11:09pm
Yes, bare indeed, the sadness of lost hope, yet the passion to go on.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me...
Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me...
Re. Passion's keep(er)
8th Jan 2017 10:51am
Re: Re. Passion's keep(er)
8th Jan 2017 11:06pm
Thanks so much for the return visits, Pm, It's always nice to see your comments...
Re. Passion's keep(er)
Anonymous
8th Jan 2017 11:31am
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Re: Re. Passion's keep(er)
8th Jan 2017 11:04pm
Re. Passion's keep(er)
8th Jan 2017 12:46pm
Re: Re. Passion's keep(er)
8th Jan 2017 11:01pm
Passion claims us this way, I suppose.
Thanks for the visit, DC, always appreciated...
Thanks for the visit, DC, always appreciated...
Re. Passion's keep(er)
8th Jan 2017 1:33pm
I had to read this three times, just to feel it wash over me fully. It's beautifully written, Kasai. That second stanza had me catching my breath. I forgot to release it until the last line. :)
Willow
Willow
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Re: Re. Passion's keep(er)
8th Jan 2017 10:57pm
I'm flattered, Willow, you've left me with such kind words and I'm so glad to share mine with you. To know you felt them means much.
Thank you, kind lady...
Thank you, kind lady...
Re. Passion's keep(er)
8th Jan 2017 2:46pm
A woman is passion's keeper, indeed. Beautiful verse, silencing ending resting in truth.
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Re: Re. Passion's keep(er)
8th Jan 2017 10:54pm
Thank you so much, Ahavati, I truly look forward to your thoughtful comments. A clever woman you are....
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Anonymous
8th Jan 2017 4:04pm
Absolutely gorgeous and organically raw with sexuality and vulnerability. I love how passionately you write Kasai.
In the last verse starting with 'As' sort of throws off since you did use it again in the same verse, but again its just a personal preference which really doesn't interfere with the poem's elegance.
In the last verse starting with 'As' sort of throws off since you did use it again in the same verse, but again its just a personal preference which really doesn't interfere with the poem's elegance.
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Re: Re. Passion's keep(er)
8th Jan 2017 10:51pm
Thanks for the lovely words, Vee, I truly appreciate you sharing your thoughts with me.
So very kind of you....
So very kind of you....
Re. Passion's keep(er)
Anonymous
8th Jan 2017 6:27pm
Kasai...as always your verse is mesmerizing and breathtaking in its passion and vulnerability...other than that, I am at a loss for words, please forgive me...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. Passion's keep(er)
8th Jan 2017 10:48pm
Sweet lady, sometimes our words are lost in silence, but we still feel every one of them.
Thank you for visiting me...
Thank you for visiting me...