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Dear Girl Just Stop!
Dear girl just stop!
Stop feeling down
stop feeling blue
Quit staring at his quotes
looking for a clue
Stop trying to translate
the music he's sharing
Quit him because
he's not so caring
Just grab a clean slate
rid some from your plate
Girl please don't worry
that
dull
sickly
aching
feeling
will pass in a hurry
You'll soon find peace
or respite at least
Stop feeling down
stop feeling blue
Quit staring at his quotes
looking for a clue
Stop trying to translate
the music he's sharing
Quit him because
he's not so caring
Just grab a clean slate
rid some from your plate
Girl please don't worry
that
dull
sickly
aching
feeling
will pass in a hurry
You'll soon find peace
or respite at least
Published 7th Jan 2017
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7th Jan 2017 5:00pm
7th Jan 2017 5:15pm
Hi thanks for stopping by and thanks for commenting. Thrilled you loved it! 💜
7th Jan 2017 5:10pm
This piece is bloody epic!
Right!
I'm nominating it for poem of the month!
Awesome writing!
Blue Skies @ You
Al
Right!
I'm nominating it for poem of the month!
Awesome writing!
Blue Skies @ You
Al
7th Jan 2017 5:18pm
Wow Al thanks for the great feedback! Really means a lot coming from you! Super thrilled you liked it!
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Anonymous
7th Jan 2017 5:13pm
'You'll soon find peace
or respite at least'
Or indeed a suitable replacement.
or respite at least'
Or indeed a suitable replacement.
7th Jan 2017 5:21pm
Suppose that could work too 😁
Thanks for stopping by LONDON-POETS and that thanks for the comment!
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Thanks for stopping by LONDON-POETS and that thanks for the comment!
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7th Jan 2017 5:33pm
Congratulations! This poem has been nominated for Deep Underground Poetry's Featured Poem of the Month Competition. You may view the nomination at the link below, and will be notified if selected.
Best of Luck and thank you for being a member of the Deep Side!
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9339/
Best of Luck and thank you for being a member of the Deep Side!
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9339/
7th Jan 2017 5:34pm
Another wonderful one.
Girl power!
Ok, maybe I can exchange the "girl" for "boy" 😁
Seeing as I feel a lot like this poem at the moment.
Did I say wonderful yet? Oh yes, very much so 🤗
Girl power!
Ok, maybe I can exchange the "girl" for "boy" 😁
Seeing as I feel a lot like this poem at the moment.
Did I say wonderful yet? Oh yes, very much so 🤗
7th Jan 2017 5:43pm
Haha DevilsChild you don't need to explain... I have a mixed gender brain so if you do too that's fine! 😁
Thanks so much though for your 'wonderful' comment!
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Thanks so much though for your 'wonderful' comment!
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7th Jan 2017 5:53pm
No mixed here. I have a penis on my body, and in my mind... that sounded so wrong, lol.
7th Jan 2017 7:11pm
Haha DevilsChild after reading your most recent writes I would never question your sexuality. I was merely pointing out perhaps you have a sensitive side which a lot of people underestimate in a male...but it's very nice to know you have a penis and think about it too! 😂
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7th Jan 2017 6:03pm
7th Jan 2017 7:16pm
It's always the way isnt it ...let's just put it down to the forbidden fruit... or we could say that certain souls are drawn to others and it's just crappy when obstacles get in the way
Thanks for commenting Cheesa
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Thanks for commenting Cheesa
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8th Jan 2017 9:48am
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10th Jan 2017 12:57pm
How to comment on a poem like this?
Such strong words coming from a such a strong woman!
Taking your power back despite the pain, loved it!
Such strong words coming from a such a strong woman!
Taking your power back despite the pain, loved it!
10th Jan 2017 1:17pm
13th Jan 2017 1:23am
I'm very familiar with this feeling. I Definitely had to stop myself a few times.
Girl please don't worry
that
dull
sickly
aching
feeling
will pass in a hurry
You'll soon find peace
or respite at least (Very clever spacing, and definitely makes for a nice tone)
Beautiful work, my friend!!
Girl please don't worry
that
dull
sickly
aching
feeling
will pass in a hurry
You'll soon find peace
or respite at least (Very clever spacing, and definitely makes for a nice tone)
Beautiful work, my friend!!
13th Jan 2017 10:34am
Glad to know I'm not alone but also sorry you have felt this too.
Again thanks for the compliments and I was worried whether the spacing worked or whether it was just my head so thanks again I love that you picked up on it! 😘
FC
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Again thanks for the compliments and I was worried whether the spacing worked or whether it was just my head so thanks again I love that you picked up on it! 😘
FC
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