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can't get it straight...
sitting in the cafe
trying to write a poem
and the waitress says
do you wish to order something
but it simply doesn't make
any sense...
Published 7th Jan 2017
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7th Jan 2017 4:18pm
This is one I'm having to read more than once...I know it's there...I just haven't found it yet.
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- Edited 8th Jan 2017 2:12am
8th Jan 2017 1:58am
I can only guess it's the 'something' that the waitress was suggesting Paul might wish to order, Ahavati.
Get it? lol.
Get it? lol.
7th Jan 2017 5:06pm
Guess sometimes, certain things just simply aren't meant
to " l i n e" u p..... :P
to " l i n e" u p..... :P
7th Jan 2017 9:03pm
common sense can sometimes prove comically senseless in it's application.
that's why 'poetry' is-------------whatever
that's why 'poetry' is-------------whatever
8th Jan 2017 2:01am
Anonymous
8th Jan 2017 2:07am
He's clever like that is Mr.Dartford; either that or a very difficult customer to have sitting in your café. One of the two, if not both, lol. ;-)
10th Jan 2017 6:01pm
do they sell inspirational prompts??? if not tell her "never to interrupt you while your working." :-)
another wee cracker :-)
another wee cracker :-)
