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Dark n Lovely,Sweet n Serene
I woke up
this morn vibin on you sumthin strong
lookin at you 3rd eye and all
lovin the way you keep your own counsel..
how you wear your poker face..
yeah baby..that's my kinda foreplay...
to sense the admissions in your omissions
those unspoken dimensions
forcing the extension of my intentions
down the left side of my boxers...
yeah you come off as sweet n serene
yet you like it hot n spicy
very dicey in maneuvering a man's emotions
but my awareness of yours maintains the status quo
so here we go two egos movin to and fro
back and forth between innuendos
constricted and convicted by love and pride
evenly matched we've barely scratched
the surface of those 'other' sides
we chose to hide...
so who better to confide
as I creep up in your mind from behind your blind spot
trickling my way through your inner sanctum
to intrigue and excite you
but you fight me every inch of the way damn you..
yeah you...my goddess of love and war
I promise to leave you throbbing and sore
cuz you don't make this shit easy
and though I hate it I appreciated it at the same time
still you gotta pay for the way you play
keepin a dude diggin your sometimey azz
a moody muthafuckah just like me
we're two sides of the same coin joined at the hips
so I fuck you with love and contempt
your feminine arrogance makes me more aggressive
more expressive and maybe a wee bit excessive
every orgasm you have makes both of my heads swell
a cocky bastard victoriously looking down
on the glorious shades of passion reeking from you
givin you more of that rough rugged and raw
feelin your fingers scrape and claw at my skin
as you reciprocate within this pain-pleasure spectrum
of ours drawing first blood
and it is these crimson stains
causing us to acknowledge two reckless hearts
shameless and tameless but never aimless
in our seeking of shelter within the shadows of one another
and though I've always claimed you as my angel
never have I assumed which realm you served if any
so independent in thought we fight like alpha wolves
yet never forgetting we're of the same pack
forever having each other's back in all things outside
of this beautiful conundrum that is us
Published 5th Jan 2017
| Edited 7th Jan 2017
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Anonymous
5th Jan 2017 3:46pm
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Anonymous
5th Jan 2017 5:03pm
This write had me...smiling, from beginning to end.
The sassy egos, that only heightens the desire.
Best things in life, don't come easy;)
I love this portion. I felt the ending was perfect.
Sealed this masterpiece wonderfully. 💓
"and it is these crimson stains
causing us to acknowledge two reckless hearts
shameless and tameless but never aimless
in our seeking of shelter within the shadows of one another
and though I've always claimed you as my angel
never have I assumed which realm you served if any
so independent in thought we fight like alpha wolves
yet never forgetting we're of the same pack
forever having each other's back in all things outside
of this beautiful conundrum that is us "
The sassy egos, that only heightens the desire.
Best things in life, don't come easy;)
I love this portion. I felt the ending was perfect.
Sealed this masterpiece wonderfully. 💓
"and it is these crimson stains
causing us to acknowledge two reckless hearts
shameless and tameless but never aimless
in our seeking of shelter within the shadows of one another
and though I've always claimed you as my angel
never have I assumed which realm you served if any
so independent in thought we fight like alpha wolves
yet never forgetting we're of the same pack
forever having each other's back in all things outside
of this beautiful conundrum that is us "
5th Jan 2017 6:50pm
5th Jan 2017 6:53pm
...ain't no sense in me quoting my favorite lines, I'd have to copy and paste the whole damn thang'!
Naajir, there's a standard your pen has set on dup. The bar is soooo high, and you get me soooo high each time I snort the lines of your cocaine poetry. #Addicted
Naajir, there's a standard your pen has set on dup. The bar is soooo high, and you get me soooo high each time I snort the lines of your cocaine poetry. #Addicted
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Jun 2019 1:47pm
5th Jan 2017 7:38pm
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Anonymous
5th Jan 2017 9:44pm
Naaj...eyes are buggin, mouth is open and there ain't nothing comin out...you stifle this bitch every time with your pen....your thoughts, your mind, your couplings...penetrate deep...god daaaayum....
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
6th Jan 2017 1:02am
A fiesty and firey lover... will always keep you warm.
Here's hoping your lioness becomes as meek as a lamb after you've ravished her with your ferocious hunger to fuck some sense into her as you fuck her senselessly and take ownership of your rite within the bond.
I sense... your presence in her life triggers the dark & lovely, and the sweet & serene within her !
How gorgeous... 😎🌻🌞
Here's hoping your lioness becomes as meek as a lamb after you've ravished her with your ferocious hunger to fuck some sense into her as you fuck her senselessly and take ownership of your rite within the bond.
I sense... your presence in her life triggers the dark & lovely, and the sweet & serene within her !
How gorgeous... 😎🌻🌞
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
6th Jan 2017 8:14am
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6th Jan 2017 9:12pm
Well bro. No need to repeat what all those before me said, but U know I know you DA MAN! :)
7th Jan 2017 2:30am
Those unspoken dimension are something else :) this was outstanding Naajir...conundrum is one of my fav words for many reasons one being i like the ways it sounds rolling off the tongue but also because it always makes me think of the madhatter's unsolvable riddle..of a life long quest searching seeking answers...just for the sheer wonder and challenge of eternally exploring..anyrate "conundrum that is us" beautifully conveys the intensity required to fuel passion
Anonymous
7th Jan 2017 4:40pm
When your writes make me catch my breath, I always end up holding it until the end. The heart and passion in that last paragraph..... rawr. I swear, I think my heart starts to beat to the rhythm of your vibe when you grab my mind the way you do.
Yeah, I like this one a little bit.
Yeah, I like this one a little bit.
