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Sweat & Sex
your lips are the igniter
touchy feely built up desire
unleashing the sweet scent
of sweat and sex
when I penetrate you
I do so with my manhood
like poetry in motion
and never the other way around
it’s our reality, and fantasy
Intertwined with one another
any others before
just can’t compare
when we get down to business
you‘re my gasoline, and I’m an inferno
endlessly feeding each other
with thrust and moans
years pass us
feelings may differ
but our fire
never dwindles
touchy feely built up desire
unleashing the sweet scent
of sweat and sex
when I penetrate you
I do so with my manhood
like poetry in motion
and never the other way around
it’s our reality, and fantasy
Intertwined with one another
any others before
just can’t compare
when we get down to business
you‘re my gasoline, and I’m an inferno
endlessly feeding each other
with thrust and moans
years pass us
feelings may differ
but our fire
never dwindles
Published 3rd Jan 2017
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3rd Jan 2017 11:20am
As soon as I saw the title I knew this was going to be good... you never disappoint ;-)
"I do so with my manhood
like poetry in motion" > my favorite lines, they roll of the tongue!
That last stanza is amazing... perfect ending to an outstanding poem...
"I do so with my manhood
like poetry in motion" > my favorite lines, they roll of the tongue!
That last stanza is amazing... perfect ending to an outstanding poem...
3rd Jan 2017 4:24pm
I like that line a lot too. I read a lot of poems mention poetry. Saying things like "making love with poetry". I was thinking, why can't the love making in real life feel like poetry? The person you're with can be the canvas. Not just a person you shove to the side for a fantasy. Life and fantasy can be one.
And really, that is how it is for me. Hardcore or loving, it is poetry in motion.
Thanks for enjoying, my lovely friend 🤗
And really, that is how it is for me. Hardcore or loving, it is poetry in motion.
Thanks for enjoying, my lovely friend 🤗
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3rd Jan 2017 12:52pm
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3rd Jan 2017 4:26pm
3rd Jan 2017 7:56pm
Favourite verse (a reminder sex can still be enjoyable many years into being together):
years pass us
feelings may differ
but our fire
never dwindles
years pass us
feelings may differ
but our fire
never dwindles
4th Jan 2017 6:37am
It was important for me to put those lines in. I think originally i had lines about home being where we are free. I think i just simply forgot to put them into the poem, lol.
But the person i love i had loved for years. It is a special love in my eyes. those lines sum it up :-)
But the person i love i had loved for years. It is a special love in my eyes. those lines sum it up :-)
