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SICK(tester to see format) really shitty poem i didin 5 minutes but gives a good insight to how i write

SICK

at 5 he sat in his chair and given two options
an elephant
or a penny
all other children pick the large stuffed elephant
but he picks the shiny, new, younger penny
they tell him that he cant love something that small
or that young
that it is just stupid
at 15 he was given another option
the old toy
or the new baby doll
again, he was left out evened
he just wanting something that is new
at 21 he was given an option
old
or new
older people
or children
he picked children
Written by Tanner_Justice
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