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The Story Within Her Smiling Eyes.
She makes everyday a glourious summers day
Clouds quickly disperse
As with tender care and her love
She heals the hurt
And soothes the inner child within me.
She is my life my world and destiny.
Even after all these years
I'm still blown away
And taken by surprise
Whenever i look into her
Her beautiful smiling beguiling eyes
As they tell a wonderful story
That only I can see
For they tell me with up most sincerity
Just how much she loves and adores me.
A warm ocean of emotion. can flow within me
No one knows the magical places together we have been
For in her i see my own reflection
And in her eyes I see eternity.
Peter Dome. copyright.2016.
Clouds quickly disperse
As with tender care and her love
She heals the hurt
And soothes the inner child within me.
She is my life my world and destiny.
Even after all these years
I'm still blown away
And taken by surprise
Whenever i look into her
Her beautiful smiling beguiling eyes
As they tell a wonderful story
That only I can see
For they tell me with up most sincerity
Just how much she loves and adores me.
A warm ocean of emotion. can flow within me
No one knows the magical places together we have been
For in her i see my own reflection
And in her eyes I see eternity.
Peter Dome. copyright.2016.
Published 29th Dec 2016
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29th Dec 2016 5:56pm
Beautiful! Most of us long to know a look of such depth, a connection of such magnitude, no matter the form. Great write!
29th Dec 2016 6:19pm
So true. thought I'd met one or two. They all told me they loved me. but alas. i knew they weren't the ones. There was something missing. Still searching. Thank you so much so glad you enjoyed it. A pleasure to hear from you. take good care. Best wishes. Moog,
30th Dec 2016 3:07am
30th Dec 2016 8:21am
Thank you very much I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. Much appreciated. Best wishes. moog.
31st Dec 2016 1:47pm
31st Dec 2016 5:02pm
Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it. I loved your poems very much and was inspired. I am now a follower. Take good care. My best wishes. Moog.
2nd Jan 2017 7:45pm
What it's all about being taken and appreciated while taking. Sentiments
and prayer beads haha, this is marvelous..
Good to read you moog!
and prayer beads haha, this is marvelous..
Good to read you moog!
2nd Jan 2017 7:48pm
I think this guy said best.
Very beautiful and sweetly
written.
It's a woman's dream to
have her companion eyes
on her. Yet, knowing she's
watched, adored and
noticeable. Honoured for her
skin deep beauty. As it
is felt in the heart and soul
when one is sincere/genuine
This type of attentiveness is far too
rare these days.
You made me smile with
this one my little moog ;)
-Howlings
Very beautiful and sweetly
written.
It's a woman's dream to
have her companion eyes
on her. Yet, knowing she's
watched, adored and
noticeable. Honoured for her
skin deep beauty. As it
is felt in the heart and soul
when one is sincere/genuine
This type of attentiveness is far too
rare these days.
You made me smile with
this one my little moog ;)
-Howlings
7th Jan 2017 6:37pm
Thank you so much. B;own away by your kind comments. yes women like to be admired, men too., although it's often just me doing the admiring. Take good care. best wishes. Mini moog.
4th Jan 2017 00:51am
This is a wonderfully written piece. Has a lot of depth behind it. A great piece moog.
4th Jan 2017 6:12pm
Thank you so much my friend. I appreciate that very much. just wish the poem eas true ha ha. take good care. best wishes. moog.
3rd Feb 2017 5:05am
When destined eyes meet, it can unlock the gateway to our souls. Great feeling when it is there. Appreciating this pen, moog🤗
