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Song
I want to sing you a song
to capture this moment
make it feel real
for the both of us
heard every excuse
I just want to shake you
say death comes
then what?
tired of dreaming of your lips
so in this song
I can finally taste them
hold you like a new born
promise to never let go
and that promise will stay true
once I put it on repeat
tonight could be
a time for no regrets
logic says it’ll never workout
so I stand next to you in silence
but when I’m alone
and I get to hit those notes
none of that will matter
~
if the rain falls
on your skin
like a touch of heaven
think of me
thinking of you
if the hurt
is way too much to bear
picture my arms
wrapped around
because that’s what I want
yeah, that’s what I want the most
lay back
when resting in your bed
picture my lips
opening up your lips
because maybe then
it would feel real
baby, it might be real
to capture this moment
make it feel real
for the both of us
heard every excuse
I just want to shake you
say death comes
then what?
tired of dreaming of your lips
so in this song
I can finally taste them
hold you like a new born
promise to never let go
and that promise will stay true
once I put it on repeat
tonight could be
a time for no regrets
logic says it’ll never workout
so I stand next to you in silence
but when I’m alone
and I get to hit those notes
none of that will matter
~
if the rain falls
on your skin
like a touch of heaven
think of me
thinking of you
if the hurt
is way too much to bear
picture my arms
wrapped around
because that’s what I want
yeah, that’s what I want the most
lay back
when resting in your bed
picture my lips
opening up your lips
because maybe then
it would feel real
baby, it might be real
Published 28th Dec 2016
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28th Dec 2016 10:11am
28th Dec 2016 12:22pm
Anonymous
28th Dec 2016 12:37pm
This is breathtakingly beautiful 💓
I know that I say everyone of yours is my favorite....and I will say it again.
Full of passion and sensual longing.
Captivating ink.
I know that I say everyone of yours is my favorite....and I will say it again.
Full of passion and sensual longing.
Captivating ink.
30th Dec 2016 7:07am
Thanks for all your support.
I appreciate it.
This one will hold close to my own heart.
I appreciate it.
This one will hold close to my own heart.
28th Dec 2016 2:19pm
When you sing, you sing full bodied and beautiful. Very much enjoyed this passionate read. :)
Willow
Willow
30th Dec 2016 7:09am
I'm sure it sounds better as text 😆
Thanks. Am very greatful you enjoyed this poem. It is one I very much love too.
Thanks. Am very greatful you enjoyed this poem. It is one I very much love too.
28th Dec 2016 3:14pm
This a beautiful write DC.
Thoroughly enjoyed the entirety of it from beginning to end. Just wonderful and sensual and so intimate.
Beautiful ink.
Keirh
Thoroughly enjoyed the entirety of it from beginning to end. Just wonderful and sensual and so intimate.
Beautiful ink.
Keirh
30th Dec 2016 7:10am
29th Dec 2016 3:02am
30th Dec 2016 7:24am
Not good lol.
I always wish I could sing better. I would love to be a lead singer in a band.
Thanks for enjoying 😁
I always wish I could sing better. I would love to be a lead singer in a band.
Thanks for enjoying 😁
29th Dec 2016 6:42am
A song of longing, beautiful in it's depths.
A far away love is such a bittersweet and lovely thing...
A far away love is such a bittersweet and lovely thing...
30th Dec 2016 7:29am
31st Dec 2016 8:48am
This is so pure... so honest...
I told you this many times before, but you know how to put your feelings into words!
I told you this many times before, but you know how to put your feelings into words!
3rd Jan 2017 5:25pm
I'm glad you could enjoy 😁
My feelings are there for all to see. Bad or good. No hiding away.
My feelings are there for all to see. Bad or good. No hiding away.
