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Barbedwire around my Lips and Heart.
Built a tall wall around me
A fortress drawbridge raised
Armoured doors under lock and key
Haunted by past broken hearted days.
Out of view out of sight
I hide away among the shadows
In a endless tormenting night.
Shards of heart lay in the rubble of forsaken dreams
Laid upon the cold dirt ridden floor
Heart burst at the seems.
Trust once as strong as steel
Now turned to rust.
I bare the pain of blood soaked barbed wire
Upon my lips and around my heart
So ripped apart
Lowered my drawbridge like a fool so many times
Never seemed to learn
Let my heart rule my mind
Made me blind.
So I lick my wounds once more
Behind those locked fortress doors
Deemed to be alone
For ever more.
Peter Dome. Copyright.2016.
A fortress drawbridge raised
Armoured doors under lock and key
Haunted by past broken hearted days.
Out of view out of sight
I hide away among the shadows
In a endless tormenting night.
Shards of heart lay in the rubble of forsaken dreams
Laid upon the cold dirt ridden floor
Heart burst at the seems.
Trust once as strong as steel
Now turned to rust.
I bare the pain of blood soaked barbed wire
Upon my lips and around my heart
So ripped apart
Lowered my drawbridge like a fool so many times
Never seemed to learn
Let my heart rule my mind
Made me blind.
So I lick my wounds once more
Behind those locked fortress doors
Deemed to be alone
For ever more.
Peter Dome. Copyright.2016.
Published 26th Dec 2016
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27th Dec 2016 6:24pm
I have felt this way too many times to count the scars....deeply relate. Beautiful piece.
27th Dec 2016 6:47pm
Hi. So good to hear from you. I feel for you I've had my heart broken so many ties I'm numb. But stupidly. I continue to lower my drawbridge once in a while. I'm addicted to love. nd have little control. I let my heart rule my mind. blinding me. Thank you. take care. moog. Loved your poem.
28th Dec 2016 6:00am
28th Dec 2016 6:12am
2nd Jan 2017 1:32am
2nd Jan 2017 12:10pm
So good to hear from you again. glad you like it. I'm a deep person I'm told. Hope you are ok. Thank you . My best wishes. moog.
7th Jan 2017 6:29pm
Yeah, I know the response,
of how permanent
(heart barbs) can truly
feel.
Soul deep, forever captured,
maybe ..
Until the word (Until) is recognised
as action, instead of spoken.
-Howlings
of how permanent
(heart barbs) can truly
feel.
Soul deep, forever captured,
maybe ..
Until the word (Until) is recognised
as action, instead of spoken.
-Howlings
7th Jan 2017 6:41pm
So true I agree. I feel sorry for anyone who feels the same. but rejoice if someone has come through ir and found true happiness.. We have to lower our drawbridge sometime. or we find ourselves alone. Thank you so much. take god care. moog.
7th Jan 2017 6:49pm
Just got inspired,
what a handsome way to
put it:
"We have to lower our drawbridge sometime. or we find ourselves alone."
what a handsome way to
put it:
"We have to lower our drawbridge sometime. or we find ourselves alone."
7th Jan 2017 7:12pm
That's great. i look forward to reading it. Take good care. best wishes. moog. Thank you.
9th Jan 2017 6:50pm
I can definitely relate, I find myself in fortress mode at the present time!
9th Jan 2017 7:40pm
Hi. Sorry you feel like this too.i wish I could help. keep writing it helps my therapy. Thank you. Best wishes. moog.
3rd Feb 2017 5:14am
Lowering the drawbridge shows you tried and are trying, that you have lived and are living.Some things are not meant to be forever. Thank you for sharing, moog.
