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Solstice
Darkness over-powering--
Forces Day's surrender ;
On cobalt canvass
Stars shiver...
sing.
Between moon-rise and midnite,
snow swirls into the hush
written for the "Let It Snow" comp
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Re. Solstice
21st Dec 2016 4:31am
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22nd Dec 2016 12:55pm
Thank You--so, so much for your gracious , up-lifting words of praise!!
My friend, i truly appreciate your support!!
My friend, i truly appreciate your support!!
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1st Feb 2017 4:09am
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1st Feb 2017 4:29am
My friend... I am truly honored and humbled by your words! I am blessed by both your friendship and faithful following! Again...my sincere thank you!
Re. Solstice
21st Dec 2016 5:38am
Hullo
very deep, dark ( despite the snow )
Lady, you've the strength of a thousand bears. may the road rise with you
good use of the elipses. tightly written. it's a credit to you and your growth
*hat tip*
very deep, dark ( despite the snow )
Lady, you've the strength of a thousand bears. may the road rise with you
good use of the elipses. tightly written. it's a credit to you and your growth
*hat tip*
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Re: Re. Solstice
22nd Dec 2016 1:38pm
Mo Chara,
Your words have touched soo deeply....leaving me blushing, very humbled, and with heart-smiles!!
To be certain--you have honored me with your encouraging words of praise, and e s p e c i a l l y with your RL placement !! Both are truly appreciated!!
Go raibh maith agat !!
( "the strength of a thousand bears"....well now, that comparison is one that i consider with the highest of regards. That leaves me with the feeling that i can over-come so many obstacles......)
Your words have touched soo deeply....leaving me blushing, very humbled, and with heart-smiles!!
To be certain--you have honored me with your encouraging words of praise, and e s p e c i a l l y with your RL placement !! Both are truly appreciated!!
Go raibh maith agat !!
( "the strength of a thousand bears"....well now, that comparison is one that i consider with the highest of regards. That leaves me with the feeling that i can over-come so many obstacles......)
Re. Solstice
22nd Jan 2017 4:20am
A hauntingly beautiful piece, DarkE! :)
I'm always amazed by poets who can write a story with just a few words and convey it in a way that paints a bold picture. Not many can do this, I know I can't!
I have missed you dearheart! xoxo
I'm always amazed by poets who can write a story with just a few words and convey it in a way that paints a bold picture. Not many can do this, I know I can't!
I have missed you dearheart! xoxo
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Mo Chara chotha`imid....this is such a wonderful surprise...to find you visiting my realm again! Such a dreary, hazy morning here, and your thoughtful, up-lifting words have brought a bit of sunshine--to be sure! I am always honored whenever you take the time to read and comment on my work, and grateful for your continued support! For ALL of these, my sincerest of THANK-YOUS!!!
Rain...I have missed you, as well !!! xoxo
Rain...I have missed you, as well !!! xoxo
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Anonymous
8th Feb 2017 5:42pm
So very beautiful.
Love your enchanting imagery.
Love your enchanting imagery.
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Re. Solstice
8th Feb 2017 6:06pm
Thank you--ever so much--for taking the time to visit my realm, and for your gracious words of praise!
I would also like to extend a special thanks--to you--for becoming a follower of my work. I think that this is one of the highest compliments that one poet can pay to another. I am deeply honored!!
It is always a pleasure to welcome a new visitor within my realm! Please know that you are welcome here--always!
I would also like to extend a special thanks--to you--for becoming a follower of my work. I think that this is one of the highest compliments that one poet can pay to another. I am deeply honored!!
It is always a pleasure to welcome a new visitor within my realm! Please know that you are welcome here--always!
Re. Solstice
5th Jul 2017 3:26pm
Indeed an emotion that has found its thought, and a thought that has found words. - Beautiful!
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Re: Re. Solstice
6th Jul 2017 7:10pm
Applepie.... Thank you so much for taking the time to read this piece, for your generous comments, and RL add! Indeed--i am both humbled, and honored, by ALL...and especially for you to consider my poem worthy enough to be compared to a quote by such an exceptional poet, as Robert Frost !! It is a pleasure to discover a new visitor to my realm! Please know that you are welcome to wander thru, any time, mo chara nua !
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6th Jul 2017 9:03pm
Go raibh maith agat as an bhfáilte. It's a pleasure to read the work of a poetess which obviously is acquainted with the night. :-)
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Anonymous
29th Aug 2017 2:47pm
Excellent.
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Re: Re. Solstice
29th Aug 2017 3:42pm
BelindaJane....indeed--it is always a pleasure to discover a new-comer within my realm! I am honored by your presence, and i may i say, thank-you for your -uplifting comment, and your visit! I appreciate both! Please know that you are always welcome to wander here, Mo Chara Nua! Sioch`ain leat--always!
Re. Solstice
27th Sep 2017 00:29am
I am completely in awe of your talent - this is beyond beauty - and i can actually see it :-)
excellence - Huge massive hugs :-)
excellence - Huge massive hugs :-)
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27th Sep 2017 2:22pm
O...David.....i am struggling to find the words...to respond to your generous, praise! In humility, i offer you my deepest heart-felt gratitude!! It is one thing, for me, to visualize a scene with my mind's eye. But, it becomes a challenge, when i want to create that image with poetic expression. I am so glad that my words were able to create the beauty of this winter's nite for you....in the same way that i "saw" it! Thank you...for your presence in my realm, and wonderful compliments upon my page! Soo many hugs for You!
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Anonymous
7th Jan 2018 3:36pm
what a soul throttling write, every time i read this one
..it speaks clearer and clearer to me..
miss you my love!!
..it speaks clearer and clearer to me..
miss you my love!!
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