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likeness
there are those beyond our means
we are beyond the means of some
in the dark our screams all mean the same
and by this means we are one
we are beyond the means of some
in the dark our screams all mean the same
and by this means we are one
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Re. likeness
Anonymous
20th Dec 2016 3:18am
Wow Twitch......very thought provoking ink......you're so right though......in our darkness we all sound the same......great ink....this made me think about a few things......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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20th Dec 2016 5:16am
Thank you as always lovely. Your ink gets me drifting also girl. Nice to return the feelings. xo
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20th Dec 2016 4:03am
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20th Dec 2016 5:19am
"A familiar darkness" Good call Mr F. Always keen for your opinion Sir. Thanking you.
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Anonymous
20th Dec 2016 4:52am
If we only truly understood 'the sameness'..underneath it all...the world would be a better place.
Love the word play TS, clever and profound, reminding me all over again your amazing pen, good to see you back, hope you'll stay awhile :)
Love the word play TS, clever and profound, reminding me all over again your amazing pen, good to see you back, hope you'll stay awhile :)
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Re: Re. likeness
20th Dec 2016 5:31am
It's sad how such simple and attainable notions are so difficult for free thinking humans to put into action.
It's good to be read by you again Vee. Your opinions are valued and appreciated girl. I do thank you. ☺️
It's good to be read by you again Vee. Your opinions are valued and appreciated girl. I do thank you. ☺️
Re. likeness
20th Dec 2016 3:40pm
The pain of Darkness descends the same upon all of us.... and yet,how unfortunate,that this simple concept cannot be recognized...
Twitch,your piece packs such a powerful punch...the insight of your ink concise and cleverly crafted!
Mo chara chotha`imid, i have so surely missed your presence within DU....and truly gladdens my heart at your return! To be certain, I hope that it is for an extended stay! xo
Twitch,your piece packs such a powerful punch...the insight of your ink concise and cleverly crafted!
Mo chara chotha`imid, i have so surely missed your presence within DU....and truly gladdens my heart at your return! To be certain, I hope that it is for an extended stay! xo
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31st Dec 2016 1:21am
Your words are always encouraging and a pleasure Enchantress. The simplest things are so often under valued and under utilised. As much as I try not to, I have the attention span of a moth and I do this myself. But what I write about, I think about. So the therapy continues. Always appreciated dear lady. I do thank you. XO
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