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ice-needles cross-stich
charcoal clouds on pewter sky--
through frayed seams snow sifts
frost bite burns blood....
to bone....
to crystalized soul
Revisited--Revised--and Inspired by the "Let it Snow....Let it Snow" comp
charcoal clouds on pewter sky--
through frayed seams snow sifts
frost bite burns blood....
to bone....
to crystalized soul
Revisited--Revised--and Inspired by the "Let it Snow....Let it Snow" comp
Published 16th Dec 2016
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16th Dec 2016 6:36pm
16th Dec 2016 8:10pm
Paul, mo Chara...
Thank you for visiting my realm....for your lovely comment....and for keeping my poem! To be certain, i am truly honored by your Reading List Feature !! :)
Thank you for visiting my realm....for your lovely comment....and for keeping my poem! To be certain, i am truly honored by your Reading List Feature !! :)
18th Dec 2016 2:03am
19th Dec 2016 2:36pm
What a wonderful welcome surprise...to find you within my realm--once more!
I was trying to convey the sense of a very bitter cold....one that delves deep--numbing both body (and senses)....impacting the very soul. I am very pleased that this piece had this desired effect on you!
Thank you--ever so much--for your visit and for commenting on my poem! Please know that both are soo appreciated!! <3
I was trying to convey the sense of a very bitter cold....one that delves deep--numbing both body (and senses)....impacting the very soul. I am very pleased that this piece had this desired effect on you!
Thank you--ever so much--for your visit and for commenting on my poem! Please know that both are soo appreciated!! <3
19th Dec 2016 11:13pm
Doesn't matter what you write my friend. This is, as always well felt and leads me thinking. Always a fan Enchantress. 😀
20th Dec 2016 2:37pm
Twitch...i am deeply humbled by your gracious comments....and most appreciative! I am, and will a l w a y s be, grateful for your following!
I have truly missed your presence on DU, and your visits within my realm! Mo Chara....it is glad that I am, that you have returned!! :)
I have truly missed your presence on DU, and your visits within my realm! Mo Chara....it is glad that I am, that you have returned!! :)
Anonymous
- Edited 28th Feb 2017 2:09am
28th Feb 2017 2:07am
Frostbitten, now ive crisp cool edges. youve sewn chilling bites here
love
love
28th Feb 2017 4:05pm
Mo Chara nua...What a pleasure to have a new visitor! "crisp cool edges" and sewn chilly bites--your descriptive reaction is impressive! ( and now i'm shivering....) Thank you--ever so much-- for taking the time to read this piece, for your creative comments, and especially for your RL !! i am truly honored and appreciative! Please feel free to wander within my realm...anytime. You will be warmly welcomed! Sioch`ain leat
26th Mar 2017 4:32am
I am ever so glad that you enjoyed this piece! Thank you for taking the time to read, and comment---both are truly appreciated!
Whenever a new visitor journey's within my realm,it is always a pleasure--to be sure! Please know that you are welcome here, anytime, mo Chara nua!
A special thank you, also for the RL, and for becoming a follower...humble and honored by both!
Sioch`ain leat!
Whenever a new visitor journey's within my realm,it is always a pleasure--to be sure! Please know that you are welcome here, anytime, mo Chara nua!
A special thank you, also for the RL, and for becoming a follower...humble and honored by both!
Sioch`ain leat!
2nd Apr 2017 4:31pm
2nd Apr 2017 5:21pm
Aaahhh....a new-comer....a pleasure--indeed! Thank you so much for visiting, and for your gracious comments! You have warmed my heart! A special thanks--also--for becoming a follower...deeply humbled and honored....and most appreciative! You may wonder thru my realm, any time! You will always be welcome, mo Chara nua!! Sioch`ain leat
3rd Apr 2017 4:29am
27th Sep 2017 00:27am
this so clearly demonstrates the power of words where less is more - beautiful :-)
Huge big Hugs :-)
Huge big Hugs :-)
27th Sep 2017 2:46pm
There are times, when i feel that i need to create in a more disciplined form...one that inspires my creativity, and also requires specific word count and choices! And David, you have just made me feel so happy that i achieved success with this self-challenging piece! Thank You---for your lovely comments.....and most of all, for keeping this piece! This is one of the greatest honors that one poet can extend to another! Gynormous HUUUGGGSSS mo Chara choth`aimid!!!
27th Sep 2017 3:46pm
causing impact with fewer words is a real skill and talent, not just anyone can do this, even seasoned writers :-)
this one was wonderful - Big Huge Hugs :-)
this one was wonderful - Big Huge Hugs :-)
27th Sep 2017 9:05pm
THANK YOU! You have given me heart-sparkles! Humongous HUGS in return!!!
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Oct 2018 4:47am
24th Oct 2017 4:48am
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