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Patchwork Planet
Scent’d prayers
roll in raindrops;
a second in eternity.
Stunned, broken beauty
in silent lament
I count snowflakes
Healing.
Comp: Let it snow..20 word max
Published 11th Dec 2016
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11th Dec 2016 4:50pm
11th Dec 2016 4:52pm
lol, you followed me so quickly that when i refreshed my page to see my entry in the comp, i had to double take, i thought somehow i ended up in your account. :p
11th Dec 2016 5:06pm
i dont know if i can even remotely compete with your word-smitten talent. I'll just stick to my one entry and cheer you from the stands :)
11th Dec 2016 5:18pm
Anonymous
11th Dec 2016 10:10pm
What a lovely read Vee...could 'see' it :-)
12th Dec 2016 3:27am
kate, what a wonderful comment and delightful surprise to have you read my work, much appreciation :)
12th Dec 2016 1:49am
12th Dec 2016 3:26am
12th Dec 2016 8:40am
Left shivers down my spine, I'm always astonished by the beauty you can compact, the imagery you evoke. You can say so much with so few words, a true talent. Fine piece, Vee.
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
12th Dec 2016 5:20pm
I'm just like you Anon, there's something about short, small, micro poetry forms that i like. My utmost respect to the writers who consistenly do great works with so little words and i'm hoping in some remote way i achieved it here, thank you for liking it.
12th Dec 2016 5:06pm
Vee, mo Chara....
Such breath-catching emotion....so concisely expressed.......and yet with all the intricate, and lovely beauty as that of a snowflake....
This one whispers quietly to the soul!
Such breath-catching emotion....so concisely expressed.......and yet with all the intricate, and lovely beauty as that of a snowflake....
This one whispers quietly to the soul!
12th Dec 2016 5:17pm
Dear Enchantress, its so wonderful to see your words and heartwarming feedback. It's been awhile and i hope you're doing well. Thank you for gracing this beautiful day, you always make me smile :)
