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" In A Woman's Hands... "
.....it started with a softness
the gentle touch of her hand
massaging the heart of this strapping man
until he is standing tall
like stalks of corn in a field
before a seasonal fall
"...I am at ease in a woman's hands"
tenderly
her breath found
it's way to my chest,
the tender warmth of
her pale lips
caressed my nipples
for a moment,
taking away my breath.......
...and I trembled
feels so good
to be man enough
to give her control
of your body, mind and soul
bringing you to the point of
that "little death"
....spinning wonderfully
out of control
trusting her implicitly,
coming full circle
to a truth told......her sweet seduction
"playing with" and sucking on *my* nipples
feeling no shame,
no weakness.....
.....just her tender hands
stroking my peace
with every beat of my heart
a slow, steady, warm, wet release
....coaxed by
the tender touch
of her gentle hands.
Published 6th Dec 2016
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6th Dec 2016 3:20pm
6th Dec 2016 4:59pm
Thank you for the read my brother. Just an "old head" sharing what he's learned......😉
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- Edited 9th Jun 2019 1:47pm
6th Dec 2016 6:15pm
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7th Dec 2016 4:41pm
Thank you my dear for the very intuitive commentary. Just as important, I hope that this poem illustrates the importance of a man being seen as simply "human" by everyone in a very intimate way......
6th Dec 2016 9:01pm
This was very eloquent and elegant! I love the picture as well, the realness of s woman's body it depicts .
7th Dec 2016 4:42pm
