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I look upon the
heaven and stars,
to find the answers
for the questions I
have yet to, but never will,...
ask.
But, when I looked
closely enough,
I saw my past and my future...
But my future
was black and dark...
Dark, as my past...
heaven and stars,
to find the answers
for the questions I
have yet to, but never will,...
ask.
But, when I looked
closely enough,
I saw my past and my future...
But my future
was black and dark...
Dark, as my past...
Published 7th Aug 2011
| Edited 19th Dec 2011
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10th Aug 2011 3:58am
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9th Sep 2011 7:57pm
ummm.... I believe in God, and I always did my whole life.. If that's what you're saying :)
9th Sep 2011 8:27pm
i was jus sayn dat dats wut i saw n ur words....like ur searchn 4 da answers dat only He Can Provide....dats all....;)
10th Sep 2011 8:18pm
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10th Oct 2011 3:12pm
10th Oct 2011 3:07pm
'have yet to, but never will,...
to ask.' should probably be 'have yet to, but will never ask.' Personally I think that works better but the topic is good and the wording is near on point. Nice metaphor for the darkness.
to ask.' should probably be 'have yet to, but will never ask.' Personally I think that works better but the topic is good and the wording is near on point. Nice metaphor for the darkness.
10th Oct 2011 3:11pm
I thought about that when I was writing it, but then I decided to go with the version which you can read now :) but still thanks :)
