Dirty D

Duende.. Luscious, dirty ink.. really love this..




Dave

Thank you so much for your comment, Dave!

Great to hear you love this one :-)

Oooohhh Oooohhh I wanna ride!! lol... Damn very hott stuff spillin from ur pen lady lol

It's early morning here and I'm afraid I woke up my neighbours with laughing out so loud :-)  
 
Thank you so much for your amazing comment!

Forgot to mention
Ur shape poetry here is flawless! :)

Thank you so much for mentioning that!

That makes me very happy :-)

Holy hell, Duende! I love the fierce bite of this one...and the visual throb, pulse...brilliant! Go get it! 😉
Willow

You make me smile big time with your enthusiastic comment :-)

Thank you so much for your words, Willow!

Daaaamn 💋
Sexy as hell, erotic ink.

Thank you so much for your comment, dear Heart!

I'm so happy to hear you enjoyed the ride ;-)

Yay! Nemo loves it :-)

Thank you so much, dear!

Very sensual and scorching hot. I love it. Good write.

Great to hear you love this one, Eswaller!

Thank you so much for your visit and comment :-)

So sexy and love the wave 🤗

Awesomeness 😜

Yay, I got an awesome again :-)

Thank you so much for your comment!

It was supposed to be a wave, but now I see boobs in my poem (lol)

You're something else, Boian ;-)

Thank you for your amazing comment!

In the words of Austin Powers, "Oh behave!"

You made me laugh out loud with your comment :-)

Thank you so much for your visit and words!

Pardon me while I pop this onto my list...  :)

Amazing comment... thank you so much, Willow!

I am honored that this one is in your list :-)

Is Dirty D a Mistress Hyde, your dark side coming up for air?  Dirty D or Dignified Duende, I love your work either way.  I'll just call it delightful.  

Dirty D is explained in the poem: it stands for Dirty Duende (inspired by Michael Jackson's Dirty Diana) It's not my dark side coming up... my dark side is always present!  
   
Thank you for your comment and for loving my work!

Where'd I leave that damn surfboard?!?!?! This is one wet and wild wave that I don't intent to let wash away!!! Superlative work!!!

What an amazing and enthusiastic comment :-)

I'm glad to hear you love this one and I'm honored by the reading list add!

Thank you so much for your words and vist!

you already know how much i appreciate your  
exquisite formatting Duende..
this left me swooning to your curvaceous verbiage
what's so amazing about this is that it never feels forced
it just flows with pure raw feminine elegance..
soon as i get some space this is going up on my RL......

Yes, I know! Still... everytime you mention that I smile :-)

Those are some amazing compliments you spilled on my page, Naajir
I'm so happy to hear that it flows and never feels forced!

Thank you so much, I really appreciate your feedback!

P.S. I never mention my own work or ask for a comment, but I was wondering if you saw Underwater World (I had the idea you would love that one, but I could be wrong)

that's a solid ride,
it'll take a man a long way...

Thank you so much for your comment, John!

Great to hear you enjoyed the ride :-)

Wowers Duende........I'm so luvin this.......the way you formatted this is absolutely masterful.......purple luv & hugs xo :)

Thank you so much for your comment, flowergirl

You make me smile by saying you love this :-)
The formatting took some time, I'm glad you think it's masterful!

Love and hugs back at ya!

i love the way it looks! as your eye skims, the shapely structure of it is gorgeous...not sure that was an ingredient but it looks luscious. also quite rhythmic. my favorite part though was this run on compounded word string:

I want that rip
off my dress
throw me
against
your
wall
oh my
and whip
my ass type
of sex please

[and, does it not look like cleavage?!]

nice job.

Thank you so much for your comment and welcome to my page! It's always nice to hear what people see in your poem... it was meant to be a wave, but could definitely be parts of the female body! I pay a lot of attention to the visual aspect of my poetry, so most (if not all) of my work is written in a shape...

ahhhh...i havent read enough of it to notice that...i guess i was stating the obvious there then. :)

It's oké! If this was your first pick, you choose wisely when it comes down to shape ;-)

Hah, I discovered the pirate inside of me is a 45-year old Dirty Dutch

Haha, never to old to discover your inner pirate!  

Thanks heaps for another great comment and for the follow...

Flowed the curves all the way through the dirt and loved every twist and turn

Great to hear you loved this one, Ragnar... thank you so much for your comment!

Hi,
You have an excellent imagination...About the human body with wild passion...Every poem differs from others and showing your desire to calibrate love, sex and passion...So nice of you...For presenting such beautiful poems...
Yedu, India

Thank you so much for your comment, Yedu!    

I really appreciate it that you took the time to read not one, but several poems... indeed, my work is divers. I'm glad you enjoyed it!    

Welcome to Deep Underground and welcome to my page :-)

Loving the hourglass figure of the line structure; don’t know if this was for a contest or something or you just felt it but you definitely worked it; I’ll call it Dirty Duende’s Wave ;)

Michael Jackson's Dirty Diana inspired this, lol, not a competition. Dirty Dutch and Dirty Duende were the first lines... then I started brainstorming, putting lines (both vanilla and kink) in between them. When I saw it could turn into a wave, I gave myself the (almost) impossible challenge to write a wave...

Will never do it again... thank you for commenting on this piece!

This was a fun write, glad you enjoyed :-)