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Typical Lad
You just like any girl don't you
Any pretty face
Anyone ordinary
You like it
A smile
A skinny body
A big booty
Basically female
I hate it
I hate that I mean so little to you
I hate that you don't recognise difference
Classy
Sassy
Vs
Brash 'n'
Trashy
You just want attention
Good or bad
Need I mention
You're just a typical lad
Any pretty face
Anyone ordinary
You like it
A smile
A skinny body
A big booty
Basically female
I hate it
I hate that I mean so little to you
I hate that you don't recognise difference
Classy
Sassy
Vs
Brash 'n'
Trashy
You just want attention
Good or bad
Need I mention
You're just a typical lad
Published 25th Nov 2016
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25th Nov 2016 11:04pm
haha, you're just a typical lad. I like that line. I'm a fairly older lad but I don't let my eyes wander if I'm with one girl.
26th Nov 2016 8:29am
Thanks and glad to hear it... I'm sure there are a few good ones left haha
26th Nov 2016 3:16am
26th Nov 2016 8:27am
26th Nov 2016 10:43am
I've never been called typical til now! How dare you! lmao jk... This was excellent, n might I add "lad"
used in this was pretty unique, haven't read it in any poem before as far as I can recall :)
used in this was pretty unique, haven't read it in any poem before as far as I can recall :)
26th Nov 2016 2:02pm
Haha typical lads aren't all bad, perhaps that should be my next poem...and thanks :)
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28th Nov 2016 3:41pm
Yes of course...
In this case the last line which ended up being the title just suddenly came to me as I was writing I guess from numerous male encounters ;) haha
In this case the last line which ended up being the title just suddenly came to me as I was writing I guess from numerous male encounters ;) haha
Anonymous
7th Jan 2017 8:07pm
Possibly, yes. Aren't we all a bit like that until we find somebody that blows us away? It's an interesting observation never the less.
7th Jan 2017 8:15pm
Haha I know I wrote this in a quick fit of jealousy because the guy in question claimed we shared a special connection but I soon came to realise he used that spiel on all the girls.
This is not one I'm particularly proud of but it's how I felt so I wrote it down
Thanks for commenting
FC
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This is not one I'm particularly proud of but it's how I felt so I wrote it down
Thanks for commenting
FC
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Anonymous
7th Jan 2017 8:19pm
It's a nice poem & thought provoking. I can imagine it's a good topic for discussion down the pub with your mates, lol.
