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Mood Swing Episode # 4: The Sweetest Rush
Thoughts of you caress my mind...
Stroking sentiments like an ocean breeze
I wanna undress you down to
Your bare naked soul..
Feel your walls collapse around me..
Like the crashing of heaven ..
Reigniting the sweet muscle memory
That exists deep inside you..
Drawing out every emotional ache..
I'll be your loving alchemist
Converting years of pain's residue
Into a new pleasure...
A new dawn...
I got you baby. ..
In that place where man and woman
First forgot one another. .
Our Eden of fertile soil where love grows anew
The way God intended..
Fruitfully multiplying in word and deed
Here in our garden variety filled with
Level upon level of passion and compassion...
Endless in how it flows from me
Infinite in how it flows from you
A divine reacquainting of sorts yes?
Come with me
And together we will fearlessly explore
The deeper meaning of us..
Powered by imagination. .
I will wrap my mind around you
And create a whole new universe..
Wrap my arms around you
And secure you within my heart. ..
Wrap my soul around you
And make you a believer all over again
All I have is what I am
Abstract and imperfect
Be the living receptacle of all my truths
Nurture me as I nourish you
Let this foundation of us flourish exponentially
As we cherish each and every moment
Along our fantastic voyage
Within this cosmic ocean of countless possibilities
Published 21st Nov 2016
| Edited 26th Nov 2016
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21st Nov 2016 2:55pm
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- Edited 21st Nov 2016 3:09pm
21st Nov 2016 3:08pm
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Oké... first off a confession: this made me tear up!
This is so utterly beautiful, that I don't even have the words to describe how it made me feel...
"I will wrap my mind around you
And create a whole new universe..
Wrap my arms around you
And secure you within my heart. ..
Wrap my soul around you
And make you a believer all over again
All I have is what I am" > this... exactly this... thank you for sharing this jewel, Naajir!
This is so utterly beautiful, that I don't even have the words to describe how it made me feel...
"I will wrap my mind around you
And create a whole new universe..
Wrap my arms around you
And secure you within my heart. ..
Wrap my soul around you
And make you a believer all over again
All I have is what I am" > this... exactly this... thank you for sharing this jewel, Naajir!
21st Nov 2016 4:05pm
Yet again your words a have wrapped around my brain and hugged it in a platonic state of utter stupefaction. This touched me, personally, personably. Engaged me and awakens me more then this morning cup of coffee. Amazingly peaceful yet exotically intense...just perfect
21st Nov 2016 5:05pm
21st Nov 2016 6:06pm
This is very tastefully done, Naajir. It's reflected more like a spiritual communion between two individuals than a roll in the hay physically. Where a man and a woman forget one another was just lovely.
Anonymous
21st Nov 2016 11:18pm
Naaj, this has to be one of the most beautiful "Love Poems" I have ever read....absolutely spectacular...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
22nd Nov 2016 00:05am
Anonymous
22nd Nov 2016 2:15am
Hey Naajir......this one brought me to a place of serenity all the way thru.......such stunning thru out.......enjoyed this.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
22nd Nov 2016 4:01am
Ah, love. Yes you can loose yourself in love and how sweet it is.
Well done.
Well done.
