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not staring straight ahead...
hey mate,
what are you looking at...
the sky, of course,
as grey as that old suit of yours,
which, I have to say,
is only ever seen
on the more solemn
occasions -
tell me,
has somebody died,
since one rarely sees
so grey a sky
refracted through
such eyes...
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Re. not staring straight ahead...
21st Nov 2016 1:45am
Re: Re. not staring straight ahead...
21st Nov 2016 2:34am
Re. not staring straight ahead...
21st Nov 2016 3:43am
A suit-grey sky must be a solemn sight... think I'd rather see a sky-grey suit any day.
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21st Nov 2016 6:19pm
Re: Re. not staring straight ahead...
23rd Nov 2016 4:57am
Re. not staring straight ahead...
21st Nov 2016 8:15am
on days like that I have a tendancy to look down, mostly
Liking this much :-)
Liking this much :-)
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Re: Re. not staring straight ahead...
21st Nov 2016 6:22pm
Re. not staring straight ahead...
21st Nov 2016 1:41pm
This is so beautiful! I was waiting for the giggle but this is amazing! I can giggle later. Very nice! :)
Willow
Willow
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Re: Re. not staring straight ahead...
21st Nov 2016 6:25pm
Re. not staring straight ahead...
21st Nov 2016 6:25pm
Sometimes you can just read it in the eyes of others and what they reflect, can't you?
Good write, my friend.
Good write, my friend.
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Re: Re. not staring straight ahead...
21st Nov 2016 6:40pm
Re. not staring straight ahead...
2nd Jan 2018 5:40pm