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Perfumed Paper
Once she got home, she wrote a note to him
On perfumed paper that she’d kept to show
Him just how much she felt – her pen nibs skim
Across the blank cream sheets; and soon she’ll go
To post the envelope her lips have licked,
Containing all the words she has selected;
They give voice to the sentiments that pricked
Her conscientious mind that is affected
By hope that he will, soon, share this disease
Called love and write post haste to prove the case
That he has read her words and they so please
He cannot lose the bright smile from his face:
The one she had in mind when, in the gloom,
She wrote on perfumed paper in her room.
On perfumed paper that she’d kept to show
Him just how much she felt – her pen nibs skim
Across the blank cream sheets; and soon she’ll go
To post the envelope her lips have licked,
Containing all the words she has selected;
They give voice to the sentiments that pricked
Her conscientious mind that is affected
By hope that he will, soon, share this disease
Called love and write post haste to prove the case
That he has read her words and they so please
He cannot lose the bright smile from his face:
The one she had in mind when, in the gloom,
She wrote on perfumed paper in her room.
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Re. Perfumed Paper
20th Nov 2016 11:12am
perfumed letters I've received are still as fragrant;
beautiful sentiment...
beautiful sentiment...
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27th Nov 2016 1:36am
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20th Nov 2016 6:48pm
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27th Nov 2016 1:36am
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Anonymous
21st Nov 2016 6:45am
Giving and receiving such is something I actually truly enjoy...and the best part is if cared for properly, it will remain...
Enjoyed this!
;)
xoxo Taryn
Enjoyed this!
;)
xoxo Taryn
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Re. Perfumed Paper
21st Nov 2016 9:16pm
If you send him this write he's yours for keeps. I like your idea of love being a disease, but this time it's a benign one. The scent to your paper is Chanel No. 5. Fine work SweetOblivion.
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27th Nov 2016 1:40am
Re. Perfumed Paper
22nd Nov 2016 6:17am
It only exists in movies ,
but t'is very generous
in imagination. well,
for me at least
but quite beautiful my sweetest oblivion
but t'is very generous
in imagination. well,
for me at least
but quite beautiful my sweetest oblivion
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27th Nov 2016 1:41am
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Anonymous
22nd Nov 2016 11:02pm
I think this flows well, and oddly it seems hotter than some of your more overtly erotic sonnets.
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27th Nov 2016 1:39am
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Anonymous
31st Dec 2016 2:42am
a pleasurable read. an old girlfriend wrote me a couple of letters smelling of perfume so this strongly reminded me of her.
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31st Dec 2016 9:51pm