Coming To Terms

I've never heard the tale from a male's perspective, not in such an open way that isn't filled with extreme sexual natures~

This one had those cues and wants, like a romantic, so I decide that this is a unique case~

Sadness and longing pull thoughts into my mind after reading this for the seventh time (can't understand what makes me adore this~)

So, forgive me if I seem to harsh in critiquing:

For whatever obvious reasons this poem had been made, it is sloppy and unpunctuated (literally.)

Although punctuation can be tricky when wanting poetry to flow like they do inside the creator's head, it is key to get the right point across.

The rhyming is off pattern-wise near the end--it seemed like you were wanting every other line to  rhyme from the second line.

The syllables are broken and cut off the flow, which can disable the current it takes as the story is being told--

And that is it for my critique~

Sorry, I'm distracted~ Such a unique poem such as this could use work but it isn't my job to rewrite it~

Honestly, this opens up so many new possible doors and ideas for me~ And it let me know that a poem of this kind (and the creator of it) exists~

Thank you for penning this up, it's very inspirational~

in that case I am glad you survived reading "it" seven times with your sanity intact? I say "it" because with the validity of your critique perhaps it doesn't deserve the label "poem".

You may call me lazy but I have no desire to re-write something I wrote in 2011.

Your last two sentences confuddle me (and yes I know it isn't in the dictionary) but at any rate, you are welcome.