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-I fell for fall,and now she's ALL I ever think about
When Autumn
comes to town,
she'll dye the
tree's gowns
Yellow,Orange
Red,or Brown
We'll watch the moonglow
drift in a soft-white haze,
blanketing the ground
around our bonfire's blaze.
comes to town,
she'll dye the
tree's gowns
Yellow,Orange
Red,or Brown
We'll watch the moonglow
drift in a soft-white haze,
blanketing the ground
around our bonfire's blaze.
Published 15th Nov 2016
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Anonymous
15th Nov 2016 6:51am
I love the peace you've nestled,
can feel the transference of it.
deeply felt
can feel the transference of it.
deeply felt
15th Nov 2016 1:24pm
Thank you,love
Autumn is upon us
I wrote this in July,
because I longed for her
I love Fall
Love you
Thank you
J'ms
Autumn is upon us
I wrote this in July,
because I longed for her
I love Fall
Love you
Thank you
J'ms
Anonymous
15th Nov 2016 5:16pm
aw you're welcome
Anonymous
16th Nov 2016 00:34am
It is my most favorite season and these lines right here brought me a huge smile..as I was there under it just last night...
"We'll watch the moonglow
drift in a soft-white haze,
blanketing the ground"
~ loved!! :)
xoxo
"We'll watch the moonglow
drift in a soft-white haze,
blanketing the ground"
~ loved!! :)
xoxo
16th Nov 2016 1:29am
Why,thank you
very much,Aine
You are too kind
We share the same
adoration for Fall
and moon
Much obliged,ma'am
Jamie
very much,Aine
You are too kind
We share the same
adoration for Fall
and moon
Much obliged,ma'am
Jamie
