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Snot
You always want something more
but
the snot in your nose
a detail
on purpose
for looking in your fucking eyes
a bit less...
Published 14th Nov 2016
| Edited 16th Nov 2016
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Anonymous
14th Nov 2016 11:54pm
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14th Nov 2016 11:56pm
Thank you dear Nemo!
I don't know though if the correct ending would be
"a bit more" or better "a bit less..." :)
I don't know though if the correct ending would be
"a bit more" or better "a bit less..." :)
Anonymous
16th Nov 2016 10:26am
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Anonymous
14th Nov 2016 11:55pm
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15th Nov 2016 10:29pm
16th Nov 2016 1:14pm
Yeap. I think itīs much better like that as well. Modified :)
Thank you Jade!
Kiss,
Art
Thank you Jade!
Kiss,
Art
