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Perfect Vision
I have an inferno of desire
for every action of hers
the craving grows more and more
making my lust overflow
dirty thoughts enter my brain
her in my bed
eyes like an ocean
brings forth the perfect vision
the taste of her lips at the end of my lips
just the thought drives me wild
an enchanting smell, my fingers through her hair
I want her so unromantically, like a horny beast
once I’m released
only her touch can tame my hunger
the flirtation is subtle yet loud
message received clearly
clothes fall to the floor
passion raging like a thunderstorm
conjuring up mystic forces
feelings that are electric
proof we’re connected
forever finding peace in each other’s arms
she is loving
she is caring
she is heaven to my hell
I am hers to mold
for every action of hers
the craving grows more and more
making my lust overflow
dirty thoughts enter my brain
her in my bed
eyes like an ocean
brings forth the perfect vision
the taste of her lips at the end of my lips
just the thought drives me wild
an enchanting smell, my fingers through her hair
I want her so unromantically, like a horny beast
once I’m released
only her touch can tame my hunger
the flirtation is subtle yet loud
message received clearly
clothes fall to the floor
passion raging like a thunderstorm
conjuring up mystic forces
feelings that are electric
proof we’re connected
forever finding peace in each other’s arms
she is loving
she is caring
she is heaven to my hell
I am hers to mold
Published 14th Nov 2016
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14th Nov 2016 2:05pm
"she is heaven to my hell
I am hers to mold"
All things have balance, yes? This is a wonderful piece...full of yearning and passion. :)
Willow
I am hers to mold"
All things have balance, yes? This is a wonderful piece...full of yearning and passion. :)
Willow
15th Nov 2016 3:52pm
DC, you took my breath away...
This is passion and poetic perfection!
"I want her so unromantically" > awesome ;-)
"passion raging like a thunderstorm
conjuring up mystic forces
feelings that are electric
proof we’re connected
forever finding peace in each other’s arms" > words only a true artist can write!
The lines after that left me speechless... thank you for sharing!
This is passion and poetic perfection!
"I want her so unromantically" > awesome ;-)
"passion raging like a thunderstorm
conjuring up mystic forces
feelings that are electric
proof we’re connected
forever finding peace in each other’s arms" > words only a true artist can write!
The lines after that left me speechless... thank you for sharing!
15th Nov 2016 3:56pm
Your comment leaves me speechless 😁
Not so sure about artist, but I sure do love to express my feelings.
Unromantically and romantically ;-)
Thanks for enjoying 😬
Not so sure about artist, but I sure do love to express my feelings.
Unromantically and romantically ;-)
Thanks for enjoying 😬
Anonymous
14th Nov 2016 2:55pm
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15th Nov 2016 3:57pm
That's such an awesome compliment.
Not sure what to say but thanks, and glad you could find such enjoyment from my poem.
Not sure what to say but thanks, and glad you could find such enjoyment from my poem.
14th Nov 2016 8:02pm
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15th Nov 2016 8:53pm
15th Nov 2016 8:57pm
I love the last couple lines...heaven to my hell....I am hers to mold. AWESOME!!!
14th Nov 2016 8:54pm
Wow, I am totally blown away.
Very creative. I love the idea and how you expanded on it tenfold. The beauty to your beast hahaha.
Thanks for sharing
KW
Very creative. I love the idea and how you expanded on it tenfold. The beauty to your beast hahaha.
Thanks for sharing
KW
15th Nov 2016 4:02pm
I like that "beauty to my beast"
I'm the beauty though 😁
Thanks for enjoying
I'm the beauty though 😁
Thanks for enjoying
15th Nov 2016 7:05am
Creatively passionate verses that touch on all the senses. Along with the artwork this was a great piece...
15th Nov 2016 4:03pm
I like the the artwork as well. Puts the poem together for me.
Thanks for enjoying 😁
Thanks for enjoying 😁
Anonymous
16th Nov 2016 2:46am
Hey Devils.......perfect ink......sensuality dripping off the edge of the page......the pic is breathtaking........luv this.....BRAVO!!! Purple luv & hugs xo :)
16th Nov 2016 9:21am
Hey purples 😉
You comment makes me smile big time. I also love you energy.
Such a cheerful person 😁
Thanks for enjoying!
You comment makes me smile big time. I also love you energy.
Such a cheerful person 😁
Thanks for enjoying!
Anonymous
18th Nov 2016 8:29pm
Sensual and delicious.
Love the detailed, passionate imagery.
Great ink, my friend. 💓
Love the detailed, passionate imagery.
Great ink, my friend. 💓
19th Nov 2016 7:39am
To tell you the truth; all my love poems are about farm animals.
I'm one sick mofo my friend 😁
Glad you could enjoy 😉
I'm one sick mofo my friend 😁
Glad you could enjoy 😉
Anonymous
19th Nov 2016 1:55pm
You sick lyin mofo 💋
20th Nov 2016 7:54am
22nd Nov 2016 10:15am
This is more than erotique, wow..
can't even define, can only enjoy
what you've shared. and it's tangible
-Howlings
can't even define, can only enjoy
what you've shared. and it's tangible
-Howlings
22nd Nov 2016 1:24pm
Wow, that is such a great compliment 😁
And this is one of my more recent favorites.
Thanks fo enjoying
And this is one of my more recent favorites.
Thanks fo enjoying
