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Fancy
I fancy myself in love,
Yet fancy leads to folly
So, because of this,
I shall remain
Anonymous.
A woman without a man,
A soul without its mate,
A star without the moon,
A flower with the inability to bloom---
I shall remain without you;
For fancy leads to folly
And you fancied me too soon----
It only led to our doom.
Yet fancy leads to folly
So, because of this,
I shall remain
Anonymous.
A woman without a man,
A soul without its mate,
A star without the moon,
A flower with the inability to bloom---
I shall remain without you;
For fancy leads to folly
And you fancied me too soon----
It only led to our doom.
Published 4th Aug 2011
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Anonymous
- Edited 11th Jun 2018 12:45pm
4th Aug 2011 9:43am
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4th Aug 2011 11:40am
How did he fancy me? Was that what you were trying to ask? To answer you, the poem implies that whom I was writing about liked me when I was unaware of their attraction. When I liked them, it was too late. That was the gist of what I was trying to get across. Hope this clarified things for you.
4th Aug 2011 11:44am
You know, I just read the header to your comment and I got it now. You weren't asking a question, but making a statement. Wow, do I feel stupid. I guess I shouldn't try and respond to comments or anything when I'm sleep deprived. >__< Sorry naturemithya and thanks for the comment. Ugh. I am a dork. LOL
Anonymous
- Edited 11th Jun 2018 12:45pm
5th Aug 2011 5:20am
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5th Aug 2011 10:10am
Thanks naturemithya! I'll be sure to check out some of your poems soon. Take care.
