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Heart Under Lock and Key
I’m here thinking of the good times
wondering was it the same for you?
left me alone picking up broken pieces
never even had the guts to explain it
believing I was so damn important
falling down just thinking about it
one moment pretending that you cared
the next you were gone, nowhere to be found
would it be enough?
If you broke down and told the truth
does that even matter now?
with your heart under lock and key
there was a day you said we were so similar
acted interested in everything I had to say
nodded along mindlessly in agreement
was I just there to fill an empty space?
wish you could of hated me a little bit more
screamed at me and called me an asshole
maybe then I would have seen an ounce of caring
had me stuck in limbo wondering
would it be enough?
If you broke down and said I’m right
does that even matter now?
with my heart under lock and key
shouldn’t have ever let my guard down
maybe it was just made up in my head
I only wish you could of explained the knife
sticking out of my back
wondering was it the same for you?
left me alone picking up broken pieces
never even had the guts to explain it
believing I was so damn important
falling down just thinking about it
one moment pretending that you cared
the next you were gone, nowhere to be found
would it be enough?
If you broke down and told the truth
does that even matter now?
with your heart under lock and key
there was a day you said we were so similar
acted interested in everything I had to say
nodded along mindlessly in agreement
was I just there to fill an empty space?
wish you could of hated me a little bit more
screamed at me and called me an asshole
maybe then I would have seen an ounce of caring
had me stuck in limbo wondering
would it be enough?
If you broke down and said I’m right
does that even matter now?
with my heart under lock and key
shouldn’t have ever let my guard down
maybe it was just made up in my head
I only wish you could of explained the knife
sticking out of my back
Published 4th Nov 2016
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Anonymous
4th Nov 2016 4:57pm
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Thanks so much 😁
I'm sure I was more over dramatic then I should of been. I just felt a bit betrayed and needed to get the feelings out.
I'm sure I was more over dramatic then I should of been. I just felt a bit betrayed and needed to get the feelings out.
4th Nov 2016 5:18pm
Brilliant last lines to a piece that gives me goosebumps...
You writings come straight from the heart... don't ever put it under lock and key!
You writings come straight from the heart... don't ever put it under lock and key!
5th Nov 2016 6:47am
i'll make an exception for you 😁
It might be locked away form others for awhile though.
Glad you enjoyed 😁
It might be locked away form others for awhile though.
Glad you enjoyed 😁
6th Nov 2016 3:33am
4th Nov 2016 5:59pm
Sadly beautiful write DC!
Lock and key is safer...but be careful not to forget where you placed your key. Because that happens all to often..Again awesome!
Lock and key is safer...but be careful not to forget where you placed your key. Because that happens all to often..Again awesome!
5th Nov 2016 6:48am
5th Nov 2016 6:57am
Sometimes it hurts us to let our guard down, but you should always have a spare key, just in case.
Saddness with a twist of sorrow...
Saddness with a twist of sorrow...
6th Nov 2016 4:09am
I open up from time to time. Most likely regret it, but still 😜
Thanks for enjoying my poem 😁
Thanks for enjoying my poem 😁
5th Nov 2016 7:03am
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5th Nov 2016 7:22am
6th Nov 2016 4:10am
6th Nov 2016 9:56am
I always enjoy the lyrical tone of your poems, DC. :)
Sad and beautiful, I agree. So I send out some love to you... <3
Sad and beautiful, I agree. So I send out some love to you... <3
8th Nov 2016 6:13am
Anonymous
19th Nov 2016 2:13pm
Very heartwrenching.
I can't imagine you ever filling an empty space.
Always ....share your honest heart, with those that matter. Life is too short. To hell with subtle, or mediocre.
Achingly....beautiful. 💓
I can't imagine you ever filling an empty space.
Always ....share your honest heart, with those that matter. Life is too short. To hell with subtle, or mediocre.
Achingly....beautiful. 💓
20th Nov 2016 1:40pm
It's hard to even know what a honest heart really is. It's all perspective in the end ^^
Thanks my awesome friend :-)
Thanks my awesome friend :-)
You are a deep and wonderful writer. I love this because
you make the electric thoughts feel overwhelming,
important and almost incurable. Lol. Hey, that's the point
right?
Reading you is like being branded, Metaphoricallyspeaking.
Very beautiful.
FS
you make the electric thoughts feel overwhelming,
important and almost incurable. Lol. Hey, that's the point
right?
Reading you is like being branded, Metaphoricallyspeaking.
Very beautiful.
FS
23rd Jan 2017 7:13am
I love that "branded" 😉 This was a special write for me and one I also love. I am greatful you could feel the poem. Thanks for enjoying, my lovely friend 🤗
