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Confession
I do not feel good when you speak
and all I hear are expectations
I could never live up to.
I do not feel good when I speak
and all you hear are words
I don't really believe. Because, if I told you what I really feel
I might lose you forever.
and all I hear are expectations
I could never live up to.
I do not feel good when I speak
and all you hear are words
I don't really believe. Because, if I told you what I really feel
I might lose you forever.
Published 1st Nov 2016
| Edited 2nd Nov 2016
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1st Nov 2016 10:03pm
What a conundrum you've penned, matthew.
One that fears both letting go and truth -
that expects both relief and change.
Good to see you back.
One that fears both letting go and truth -
that expects both relief and change.
Good to see you back.
2nd Nov 2016 3:14pm
1st Nov 2016 10:56pm
2nd Nov 2016 3:14pm
1st Nov 2016 11:07pm
it's what we all feel at one time or another... such a very universal feeling that no one wants to admit to. simply put, and because of that, it's punchy. well appreciated, matt.
2nd Nov 2016 3:14pm
3rd Nov 2016 6:31am
they say the truth will out - they say the truth will set you free - I think they say far to much :-(
I can relate to this difficult conundrum - excellent write :-)
I can relate to this difficult conundrum - excellent write :-)
3rd Nov 2016 2:53pm
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