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I Experienced Her, But My Heart Belongs to Him
As she moved in closer persistent.Her hair like the sun her eyes like the sky,
I tried to feel no emotion.
For she was like me, feminine and soft.
Her scent like peaches made me wonder what her lips tasted like.
As her body pressed against mine,I tried to feel no emotion.
But as she insisted my kiss, I experienced a moment of forgetfulness!
You see my heart belongs to him!
I tried to feel no emotion.
For she was like me, feminine and soft.
Her scent like peaches made me wonder what her lips tasted like.
As her body pressed against mine,I tried to feel no emotion.
But as she insisted my kiss, I experienced a moment of forgetfulness!
You see my heart belongs to him!
Published 3rd Aug 2011
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Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Aug 2011 3:45pm
3rd Aug 2011 3:12pm
"I experienced a moment of forgetfulness" I like the honest simplicity of it, great job.
Anonymous
- Edited 11th Jun 2018 12:45pm
3rd Aug 2011 3:15pm
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Anonymous
3rd Aug 2011 4:57pm
Emmanuelle,
I agree with mememe, your line "I experienced a moment of forgetfulness" really tied this one together. Really enjoyed.
tornado
I agree with mememe, your line "I experienced a moment of forgetfulness" really tied this one together. Really enjoyed.
tornado
