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Within The Heart
Arthur's note: I wrote this for my friend on here for her b-day.
I wasn't planning on posting it, but seeing as she might be leaving,
wanted to show that we all wish her well! ^^
Good luck! Come back home sometime ;-)
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a woman with grace
love that illuminates
always demands respect
for she has the power of fury
she’s a woman of passion
one who craves freedom
never fearing weakness
becoming stronger through pain
always with laughter and sass
she sat in sugar once
so she has a sweet ass
or so I’m all assuming
gladly calling her my friend
a true beauty to be treasured
welcoming to all that deserve
holding them close within the heart
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lines that were cut(yes I kept them, lol):
"an awesome friend to me
I never felt unwelcome
always room for love
within her heart"
"she has the power of love
and I have the power of snowball!
a fight that will end in blood
If i ever got the pleasure"
"when the day comes where she stops talking to me
I will eat a bowl of salted caramel ice cream
put on the notebook, and cry for days
never forgetting about my dearest of all friends"
Guess you could see why they were cut :-/
I wasn't planning on posting it, but seeing as she might be leaving,
wanted to show that we all wish her well! ^^
Good luck! Come back home sometime ;-)
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a woman with grace
love that illuminates
always demands respect
for she has the power of fury
she’s a woman of passion
one who craves freedom
never fearing weakness
becoming stronger through pain
always with laughter and sass
she sat in sugar once
so she has a sweet ass
or so I’m all assuming
gladly calling her my friend
a true beauty to be treasured
welcoming to all that deserve
holding them close within the heart
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lines that were cut(yes I kept them, lol):
"an awesome friend to me
I never felt unwelcome
always room for love
within her heart"
"she has the power of love
and I have the power of snowball!
a fight that will end in blood
If i ever got the pleasure"
"when the day comes where she stops talking to me
I will eat a bowl of salted caramel ice cream
put on the notebook, and cry for days
never forgetting about my dearest of all friends"
Guess you could see why they were cut :-/
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Re. Within The Heart
29th Oct 2016 11:02pm
She's lucky to have a friend like you DC... Your a kind soul...great write btw! :)
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Re: Re. Within The Heart
30th Oct 2016 1:00am
She helped me during a time I needed. This was the least I could do 😁
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed 😄
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed 😄
Re. Within The Heart
Anonymous
30th Oct 2016 00:44am
Words...which I treasure. 💓
Thank you.
I am so very thankful that we have crossed paths.
You have a very beautiful, sensitive, caring heart.
I wish for you...nothing but the very best. Always.
....much love from my heart to yours. ❤️
Thank you.
I am so very thankful that we have crossed paths.
You have a very beautiful, sensitive, caring heart.
I wish for you...nothing but the very best. Always.
....much love from my heart to yours. ❤️
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Re: Re. Within The Heart
30th Oct 2016 1:06am
I am truly grateful for our time, and for the poetry we made. As well as the talks that helped me when I needed.
Follow the path that will make you happy. Whatever that may be 🤗*Hugs*
Follow the path that will make you happy. Whatever that may be 🤗*Hugs*
Re. Within The Heart
Anonymous
30th Oct 2016 1:35am
Awe Devils.......you've brought a beautiful tear dripping down my cheek.......wonderful tribute to a beautiful heart......soul......sweet friend and Lady.....she's been very much a blessing to me........gorgeous write.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Within The Heart
30th Oct 2016 9:03am
Re. Within The Heart
30th Oct 2016 6:48am
Poetry dedicated to a truly, passionate soul with an amazing heart. To know their kind is always special.
A very touching write...
A very touching write...
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Re: Re. Within The Heart
30th Oct 2016 9:05am
I met some great people on here. And yes, it's sad to see them go. But I hope for Heart as well as all others the best.
Re. Within The Heart
30th Oct 2016 11:16am
Writing hubs are the best places to find kindred souls ! Your words are evident of such... 😎🌻🎈🌞
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Re: Re. Within The Heart
30th Oct 2016 11:23am
Yeah, I don't even know what to really say. I know it's not necessarily forever.
Just kind of heartbreaking ^^
It is what it is :-p
Just kind of heartbreaking ^^
It is what it is :-p
Re. Within The Heart
30th Oct 2016 6:20pm
Such a beautiful Ode to a beautiful Woman ♥
I'm speechless... you must miss her!
She will be missed...
I'm speechless... you must miss her!
She will be missed...
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Re: Re. Within The Heart
31st Oct 2016 6:38am
Re. Within The Heart
1st Nov 2016 4:08am
gladly calling her my friend
a true beauty to be treasured
welcoming to all that deserve
holding them close within the heart
lovely lines
xoxo
a true beauty to be treasured
welcoming to all that deserve
holding them close within the heart
lovely lines
xoxo
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Re. Within The Heart
4th Nov 2016 8:11am
Good Lord I hope this is about HowlingWhelms, I've been out a few days and find her gone. She will definitely be missed and my heart is sore. She was an amazing woman with a truly beautiful spirit. If it's not then it's a beautiful tribute for the intended. Much respect,
SURVIVOR
SURVIVOR
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Re: Re. Within The Heart
I think she's still around, I hope, lol. Too funny. No, this was for withintheheart. She left sadly 😓 And it suuuuucks. Hope she is doing well 😁
Hope HowlingWhelms isn't gone through! I hate when talented people leave 😢
Hope HowlingWhelms isn't gone through! I hate when talented people leave 😢
Re: Re. Within The Heart
4th Nov 2016 10:27am
WithinTheHeart was also another of my favorites. She will be sorely missed. HowlingWhelms profile, poems gone. I don't understand either being away, I just know my hearts very sore. I hate it also, I found both highly inspiring. Dumb ass me should have read the title more closely, oops lol. Respectfully,
me
me
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Re: Re. Within The Heart
4th Nov 2016 11:36am
I always say people come and go... but two great ones leaving so soon. Just seemed like they had more to give.
They need to do what is right for them though. I get life comes first :-)
They need to do what is right for them though. I get life comes first :-)
Re: Re. Within The Heart
4th Nov 2016 12:27pm
To true. I just hope they're well and know just how many lives they touched. Respectfully,
me
me
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