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Venus
fingertips
slip
along
my neck
draw spirals
around
fiery nipples
sighs escape
my cherry
red lips
thinking
about
you i
get
really
wet
moist
tips slide
along belly
sweaty skin
all the way
down to
venus
and
then
circles
strokes
pressure
pleasure
panting
oh my
drops
of lust
drip drip
drip
fingers
they slide
slip slip slip
deeper inside
thinking of you
i start to convulse
faster and faster
i stimulate my
sweet pearl
until .. .. .. ..
oh fuck oh my god
how i wish you were here
slip
along
my neck
draw spirals
around
fiery nipples
sighs escape
my cherry
red lips
thinking
about
you i
get
really
wet
moist
tips slide
along belly
sweaty skin
all the way
down to
venus
and
then
circles
strokes
pressure
pleasure
panting
oh my
drops
of lust
drip drip
drip
fingers
they slide
slip slip slip
deeper inside
thinking of you
i start to convulse
faster and faster
i stimulate my
sweet pearl
until .. .. .. ..
oh fuck oh my god
how i wish you were here
Author's Note
If You Were Here Tonight.
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Re. Venus
Anonymous
27th Oct 2016 5:18pm
I swear I can hear the sizzle on the screen...wow! :)
Willow
Willow
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Re: Re. Venus
27th Oct 2016 5:30pm
Re: Re. Venus
27th Oct 2016 5:32pm
Thank you so much and welcome to my page!
You make me smile with your comment :-)
You make me smile with your comment :-)
Re. Venus
27th Oct 2016 5:30pm
you sexy woman you beautiful Duende this is red hot erotic..
made my morning fresh with dew ;)
love Brenda
made my morning fresh with dew ;)
love Brenda
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Re: Re. Venus
Dear Crim, you make me smile big time with your amazing comment!
I'm glad I made your morning :-)
Love, Duende
I'm glad I made your morning :-)
Love, Duende
Re. Venus
Anonymous
27th Oct 2016 6:38pm
Love this very sensual write 💓
Sexy, and hot as hell 💋
Words and yearning that I understand so very well.
Sexy, and hot as hell 💋
Words and yearning that I understand so very well.
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Re: Re. Venus
27th Oct 2016 7:04pm
Thank you so much, dear Heart ♥
Great to hear you love this one and found it hot as hell :-)
Yes, the yearning... oh, the yearning... many of us know that all to well...
Great to hear you love this one and found it hot as hell :-)
Yes, the yearning... oh, the yearning... many of us know that all to well...
Re. Venus
Anonymous
27th Oct 2016 8:37pm
One word - Hot.
I love the ending.
I love the ending.
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Re: Re. Venus
28th Oct 2016 7:11am
Re. Venus
27th Oct 2016 10:31pm
I get a good picture in my head ^^
A poem out of this world for sure :-)
Yum yum
A poem out of this world for sure :-)
Yum yum
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Re: Re. Venus
28th Oct 2016 7:12am
Re. Venus
27th Oct 2016 10:49pm
That absence at the end may bring a tear but the self-fulfillment is a consolation. The mind can be the most erogenous of zones. Always a pleasure to have a companion to make it all tangible of course but, until then, auto-eroticism is the only ism for me. Thanks for fueling my fantasies Duende.
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Re: Re. Venus
Thank you for your comment, Crowfly!
Great to hear I fueled your fantasies and yes... the mind is definitely an erogenous of zone!
Great to hear I fueled your fantasies and yes... the mind is definitely an erogenous of zone!
Re. Venus
28th Oct 2016 00:33am
When I finished the poem, I realized my finger was rubbing back and forth against the bottom of the table. I think you subconsciously got me to masturbate without knowing it. God job. :D
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Re: Re. Venus
28th Oct 2016 7:17am
Well... if I evoked a reaction like that I did good :-)
Thank you so much for your comment, you made me smile!
Thank you so much for your comment, you made me smile!
Re. Venus
28th Oct 2016 6:05am
Re: Re. Venus
28th Oct 2016 7:18am
Thank you so much, Eswaller!
Great to hear you love this one, I truly appreciate your comment!
Great to hear you love this one, I truly appreciate your comment!
Re. Venus
28th Oct 2016 6:41am
Re: Re. Venus
28th Oct 2016 7:20am
Wow... what an amazing comment!
Great to hear you love that line, I was pretty happy with it myself :-)
Thank you! I really appreciate your words, Kasai!
Great to hear you love that line, I was pretty happy with it myself :-)
Thank you! I really appreciate your words, Kasai!
Re. Venus
28th Oct 2016 10:38am
Well... Bein' from MARS... All I got
Oh fuck oh god! Oh fuck oh god!
Etc etc... SPLLLAAATT...Oooooohhhh fuck...
Oops! lol
Oh fuck oh god! Oh fuck oh god!
Etc etc... SPLLLAAATT...Oooooohhhh fuck...
Oops! lol
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Re: Re. Venus
28th Oct 2016 11:33am
Hahaha, you make me laugh out loud with your comment!!!
Thank you so much for you continuous support, Poetik!
I truly appreciate your words :-)
Thank you so much for you continuous support, Poetik!
I truly appreciate your words :-)
Re. Venus
Anonymous
29th Oct 2016 3:49am
Dear Duende...must be something in the air...that said activity has been going around...steamy hot and got the blood flowing...simply yum!
With love - Taryn xoxo
With love - Taryn xoxo
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Re: Re. Venus
29th Oct 2016 5:52am
Dear Taryn, thank you so much for your comment!
Steamy hot and got the blood flowing... I can't ask for more ;-)
Love, Duende
Steamy hot and got the blood flowing... I can't ask for more ;-)
Love, Duende
Re. Venus
Anonymous
29th Oct 2016 5:07am
Hey Duende........keep your door unlocked......I'm sure he will be right over before your next breath.......sexy luring ink.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Venus
Hey flowergirl,
You make me smile big time with your 'keep your door unlocked' :-)
Thank you so much, I really appreciate your comments!
Love, Duende
You make me smile big time with your 'keep your door unlocked' :-)
Thank you so much, I really appreciate your comments!
Love, Duende
Re. Venus
3rd Nov 2016 6:35am
Truly feeling where you took your words by letting them breathe for you.
And thank you for the add, its apprecited
And thank you for the add, its apprecited
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Re: Re. Venus
Thank you so much for your comment!
I truly appreciate your words!
Welcome to DUP :-)
I truly appreciate your words!
Welcome to DUP :-)
Re. Venus
4th Nov 2016 3:44am
the hesitation & the stimulation & the sweet downlow
& then the pop!
so, so seductive...
& then the pop!
so, so seductive...
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Re: Re. Venus
4th Nov 2016 6:16am
Thank you so much, John!
Great to hear you found this one seductive :-)
I really appreciate your comments!
Great to hear you found this one seductive :-)
I really appreciate your comments!
Re. Venus
6th Nov 2016 11:27am
Oh, Duende, you truly have become one of my favorites here on DU. :)
Great ink...
Great ink...
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Re: Re. Venus
6th Nov 2016 12:20pm
Oh wow, that's an amazing thing to say and a huge compliment!
You are definitely one of my favorites as well :-)
Thank you so much for your words and for taking her home with you!
You are definitely one of my favorites as well :-)
Thank you so much for your words and for taking her home with you!
Re. Venus
20th Nov 2016 7:19pm
Swweeet!!! What a wild read!! So fun!
drops
of my lust
drip drip drip
fingers
they slide
slip slip slip
deeper inside
Oh fuck oh my god!!
Hell yeah!!
drops
of my lust
drip drip drip
fingers
they slide
slip slip slip
deeper inside
Oh fuck oh my god!!
Hell yeah!!
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Re: Re. Venus
21st Nov 2016 2:44pm
I must admit I'm fond of this one as well :-)
Writing it was such a pleasure, glad to hear you enjoyed the read and the ride...
Writing it was such a pleasure, glad to hear you enjoyed the read and the ride...
Re. Venus
5th Sep 2018 6:28am
For the record:
Any guy reading this wishes they were there.
Phenomenal description of sensations, you really let us into and under your skin in this one
Any guy reading this wishes they were there.
Phenomenal description of sensations, you really let us into and under your skin in this one
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Re: Re. Venus
6th Sep 2018 5:40am