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Behind doors
Is late and I am waiting for you laying in bed naked
You called up and said; Mami I am almost there I am crazy to see you.
It was a busy day mami a lot of shit happening at work I just want to get lost in you and you in me so we can overcome this world.
Papi I am here for you. Let's make love to each other and get recharged!!!
He opens the door I was behind it! I jumped on top him we kissed and the world was overcome ....
To your imagination the rest!!!
You called up and said; Mami I am almost there I am crazy to see you.
It was a busy day mami a lot of shit happening at work I just want to get lost in you and you in me so we can overcome this world.
Papi I am here for you. Let's make love to each other and get recharged!!!
He opens the door I was behind it! I jumped on top him we kissed and the world was overcome ....
To your imagination the rest!!!
Published 27th Oct 2016
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27th Oct 2016 2:16am
27th Oct 2016 10:36am
27th Oct 2016 6:02am
Romantic and sexy hot write - I am content you leave the rest to the reader's imagination.
Favourite line: Let's make love to each other and get recharged!!! Like the mental image, reinforced by the picture, of sex as recharger of marital batteries.
Favourite line: Let's make love to each other and get recharged!!! Like the mental image, reinforced by the picture, of sex as recharger of marital batteries.
27th Oct 2016 10:39am
I think intimacy in a couple fulfill many aspects and on those difficult times tough days it is a most to share a moment with your spouse and if is loving each other even better.
Brigitte
Brigitte
28th Oct 2016 9:54pm
I have just posted a poem inspired by the beautiful picture accompanying yours.
Anonymous
27th Oct 2016 12:18pm
I can feel something here FLC8. I believe it's the electric current, as passion spills over. I like the anticipation, the tease in the torture of missing your lover all day, knowing they are waiting, wanting & giving.
Billy We both understand what's overcoming the world. Not many people will ever understand
Thanks for your always honest comments.
Love u!
Brigitte
Thanks for your always honest comments.
Love u!
Brigitte
Anonymous
1st Nov 2016 11:22pm
Haha "8"........I luv a sexy write with a tease at the end......brilliant!! Enjoyed.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
10th Nov 2016 2:36am
